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I had envisioned something a little different, but once the wife is on board for a threesome it's all uphill from there.

As a near hopeless romantic … yes, the storyline captivating; the closing so perfect. But the two main characters so creatively crafted — each uniquely different, and the line about Trish so revealing. Thanks.

Herpes …

Yaaawn! Boring. Repetitious.

Thanks Splinter737 -- I appreciate the compliment. I have some more ideas lined up to follow on from this story, but at the moment, I'm working through an ending to the Beachfront Property series. After that, I'm quite deep into a draft story set in Coral Point, so those two are my...

Perfect length and pacing to this story. Will a kiss ruin this story? Wouldn't mind finding out.

Tom was a hell of a ‘best friend’, over a bunch of years. She couldn’t keep her legs closed before the war, why the hell could she have thought Joe would be husband to jer and Cheryl? Joe should have been awarded for not slapping the tits off the bitch. All that on top of an incredibly...

This could get interesting

A fun story. You need to work on your editing while you work on your next story.

@olddave51. I do agree with you to a certain extent, but if people don't speak up and shine light on corruption, fraud and bad business practices? Who then?

Lying, thieving politicians and business people are taking over the world, helped by the orange stain south of the border. Democracy...

Great set-up. Kudos!

Realized that when I changed ten years to eight years in one spot, I forgot to change the other. My apologies. That one slipped through review.

This is the best writing I've seen on Literotica in ages. Maybe ever. So many stories seem like they were written by AI. Your characters have a realism about them. Thank you so much for restoring my hope for the Literature and not only the Erotica!

Fun between husband and wife! Nice change from the usual cuck horse shit around here. Thanks for writing.

Thank you for the story.

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A tighter read than previous work you have done. Looking forward to part two.

Gone off the rails. Six months from now Mary will be dead from STDs.

I haven’t read any of the other comments on this story but I’m sure that this inconsistency has already been pointed out. As Erica explains all the details of the incident, a couple of times she mentions that she knew what was happening but it felt good. What????? But then she goes...

Always so good.

This is every young man’s fantasy. Then he gets older and wants to watch his wife being fucked by some other guy.

By the way …

… THANKS 😎 for putting me on your favorites list!!

… Love & Lust & Later. Levi

"It sat up on top of the zipper and button like a bag of assorted fruit"

LOL, Loved this story! Can't tell you how many times I’ve been in James position only I never got the happy ending. Definitely need a part 2!

This could have been hot but I have literally no idea how some gets pinned by a barbell halfway through a *deadlift*?

Like you just drop the wait to the ground, it’s the easiest lift to end with zero harm

In all my years, I never remember a woman shaving her "Lady Bits". It just wasn't done. Trimming, yes.

Damn - Your writing just gets better and better. Awesome series starting out. How many chapters do you plan on? 5.0*

Excellent start!

SOOOOO. MUCH. BUTTSTUFF.

Good Stuff

Great story!

Happy endings all round and wonderfully written!

Thank you

Extremely hot

So she wanted an ongoing affair, was upset it was only a one night stand! No thought for her family or anyone but her happiness.

And the whole man code is such a cliche now! Never mind the broken trust, selfishness, disregard for his pain and hurt! No he must end it because of...

10 Big Blazing Stars for a Hot Story and good dialog. thanks, for the Effort. Thanks, Buster2U

That was powerful, painful and exhilarating - the time shifts made this character study so real, so very creative. Said this before, Carrie is one of the most captivating, enigmatic characters out there. Thanks for sharing more of Adelina; as a near hopeless romantic … .

That was super-sweet and I love the range of body types and life stories and races and gender presentations you worked in without fetishizing anything.

Awesome!

I wonder what would happen if either of them broke the silence…