Sci-Fi & Fantasy Story Comments

I have to say that I find Fatima’s attitude very off putting to say the least, but I guess it’s different strokes for different folks in this situation. Same goes for Leah’s kinks.

Dam sorry that this chapter ended and hoping the next chapter will arrive soon. As with all the previous chapters, 5 stars.

Sorry for the delay, everybody. Technical problems.

You are becoming my favorite writer and I search daily for new chapters.

Well this should prove to be quite interesting seeing someone fighting a dragon? WOW what a way to end a chapter keep the stories coming you are obviously really putting your heart and soul into your stories.

Omg why did you stop :O

Just epic, great writing and what a fight !

Great set-up. Kudos!

Story title hinted at some4thing intriguing, it's just taking a lot of background building, a lot.

Still, enjoying it so far, I think.

"Nooo, my boobiiieeesss" gave me such a big smile. This little story was thoroughly delightful.

It's always the anonymous with the bad comments. Great chapter, the flow was perfect and the battle was fun to follow/understand.

Yeh the MC is one psychopathic dark character deriving pleasure from demeaning woman.

While the first story had an erotic element, the remaining stories just spiraled.

Shame.

🙏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

Thanks for letting us know about the two week delay. You deserve a break. I wouldn’t normally even notice but you have been the most reliable producer week after week that I would have noticed and worried.

Patiently waiting for the next chapter

Damm good chapter, hás someone pointed out, if this is your 100th post, you could ended with the full fight, and make a different post like a marker. But if the fight is over, and this was One of your greatest chapters. 8/5

Nice story, I like the start. We how the story progresses. AAAA++++

Another 5 star story. Please disregard all the haters & negative feedback. Your stories are as awesome as always. I am glad you chose to rest up. You have consistently been giving your fans weekly stories that it amazes me you can keep with the self imposed deadlines! Will eagerly...

More great stuff. Send it!

Something about your writing brings me viscerally into the breath play. The whole story is wonderful, and that in particular is quite fulfilling.

Great story - poorly written = 3 stars. There is so much promise here.

Excelent as always.

Hope the break works for you - will be waiting (can't say patiently.. ;) ) for your return :)

Many thanks for sharing with us all.

Sorry about the delays on the final chapter. Blame the admins.

obsessed with this series. cant wait for more!

I don't think I remember what the role of the militia is? Helping protect the bunker as people enter makes some sense, though it implies that the army by itself will not suffice (people will try to sneak/force their way in at the last moment). Will the militia protect the 'closed'...

well written, well paced, and full of surprises

will wait for your return

I seriously hope that the only reason we don't have a Part 2 to this story yet is that it takes a lot of time to write (and proof) 29 pages.

Really enjoyed this story and hope to see more of it.

David really said "I can fix her".

An interesting imagining of first contact with an alien species, from the point of view of a human who is not academic, scientific, military, or political, but a sort of accidentally caught up in the center of things. Great world-building and look at alien culture from the point of...

@ Anon of January: If killing doesn't revolt you, then you've never played the live/enhanced version of 'Call of Duty', where the bullets smack you with a wet-sounding thud, the enemy isn't in uniform, everybody and his brother carries an AK for simple protection, there are no magic...

Lovely work as usual ivy

I'm saddened by the fact that this is your last book on this story but either way this is amazing

I am glad you are trying not to burn yourself out and I will anxiously but happily await the next incredible chapter.

I’m loving your story, looking forward to more from you.

She seems nicer than most people I have met. 👍

Well , dear BQ you and The BRS are the steel chain , bounding me to this site. But this chapter should have been a very very special installment of great saga, you just fucks that with your so called writers block, i am reading lit since 2009 and you are 1st who reached the benchmark...