NonHuman Story Comments

I figured with Nyx being nicknames the lady of the lake, it has to leas to some king Arthur backstory

@litewriter1854ar You're very welcome! Glad you enjoyed it! 😁

It keeps getting better every chapter

urgh such a shame, really liked reading this

…Forgot to add my vote to the others already asking for a follow up!

I think Hekla might have some inner conflict next as she goes about her tough seafaring boss girl life… trying to resist tge distraction of thinking of and longing for Mr. Kraken and their time together… Perhaps...

Well written - 5 stars again. I think your take on hentai-type, tentacle stuff maaaay just be slowly growing on me ;) (pun not intended!).

I do prefer the Kraken story with the monster humanized, engaging in great dialogue and having a personality, but this was fun too, more in...

A good start. Thank you for sharing this series.

"it's" is a contraction of "it is". If it makes sense to write "it is", you can substitute "it's" instead. If it doesn't, use "its".

"its" means "of or belonging to it", whatever it might be. It's the impersonal alternative to "his"...

A unique and entertaining read well told

A really good story, with only a couple small hiccups. During the story, James held the crossbow bolt, threatening to impale Amber through the heart. Towards the end, you said that ,.... " James had been holding a stake next to her heart . " Still, a strong 4 Star ⭐⭐⭐⭐ rating...

If I don't read the tags, Jenny just might take offense. I'd prefer her capricious nature stay fixed on the Order, thank you very much.

Beautiful story, thank you for it. Five stars plus.

I know, I am so sorry.

Wanted to update everyone, I’m currently working on the next chapter of this saga (as well as our futa friends in slave of a tentacled beast). I’m not far into yet, but i’m getting my muse back after that hiatus. Thank you!

Good chapter. I look forward to how far you go with this story. Thanks

I like the story and premise, but this chapter just felt like a parade of pun characters with little character development or point. The new hunters were interesting. Maybe build up the purpose of the "training " more. There are also a number of minor editing issues throughout. Looking...

So listen. Team Penny. Team Blue. It sounds like you lot need to go out into the alley around back and duke it out, to see who gets their next chapter first 😅😅

Teasing, teasing! I'm flattered that you like my series so much, it really motivates me to do right by my characters....

Amazing, every scene was easy to visualize, the tenderness and carefulness when she could rip him to shreds...great character building. I love everything you submit!

Great story, still waiting for more :)

And yet they don't see the trap

Wow! There's a Welsh word, meaning, roughly, 'amazing' that seems appropriate here: hwyl! That's what I think of this.

It's not that I didn't think you could do serious, but everything else you've published here has been so brightly coloured, so cheerful. Yet, here you steep us in...

OMG! OMG! I'm still reeling from the story! Everything about it was brilliant, especially the 4-5 paras early on describing the shape-shifting in detail... bittersweet indeed

Please get back to the Adventures of Penny Thompson series. These other stories have been lacking in comparison.

Absolutely brilliant and beautifully written. Thank you for sharing

Oh my God. This is beyond words, it is art, to it's core.

I’m a paraplegic, and after being squashed by a Suburban, my wiring is all goofed up. I can have multiple orgasms, that I quit counting at thirty, one right after the other. It’s exhausting, and sometimes I have to recover for a good half hour, in that time in some trance of too much...

Crap! Crap, crap, crap! My handkerchief is soaked. A kleenex pile next to me. I swore I could do this without breaking down, being my second read through. So much for that.

Apologize to the Fae?! Oops. Because this is my second time through, I knew I should read D&H and Last...

This is my favorite book series ever. I cried at the part with Tink! Bigfoot and Darren and Ana had such a difficult decision to make.

And wow finally hearing about the Clue incident!! That would be terrifying. I wonder if one of them was actually murdered.

Fantastic

Random question- does Amara have pubic hair, or are demons naturally smooth?

Her shape-shifting abilities lead to all sorts of interesting thoughts: does she age, gain/lose weight, does her (non-pubic) hair grow? And is it even meaningful to ask that, since she can make her body...

Oh, my. This one is an eye opener. Please keep writing.

This is so good. More!

You had me crying in so many places. The Hawaiian warriors and their battle cry. The Arizona in one last battle. Damn all these feels anyway. Can't see the page to read.

Once again you deserve a standing ovation for your storytelling. Emotions running happy and sad. Thanks for sharing...

Let's fucking gooooo man

The whole collection was great ,10 stars on this story!

FINALLY! A FEMALE WEREWOLF X HUMAN MALE STORY THAT DOESN’T END WITH THE MALE BECOMING A WEREWOLF!