Comments on Chain Stories

Really enjoying this on a second read-through.

Good story. Definitely needs part 2.

intense, a,plot that's looking for more at every turn . last chapter far way focussed

Congrats.Not my kink but couldn't stop reading.

What the fuck am I doing?

What a cruel ending!

Very nicely written, though. Loved it.

I'm typically not into the incest stories, but this one I actually enjoyed. It's a lot more plausible than the typical ones in the Incest/Taboo section.

I gave it 5 stars

Great story!

Why would she keep the other persons ID secret?

Started off interesting,but the ending was utter rubbish.

A shame we never got to read about fat bastard and his comeuppance, would’ve made this story perfect.

Very, very well done!

Fableus Interruptus !

4-stars. I like more of the story than I disliked. It wasn’t your best. Unfortunately, I think you had an accurate assessment of the declining moral character of our intelligence community and military leaders. There are some really outstanding men of honor in our military and...

A story unfinished … pity!

HEARTSTRING TUG ... AT END

CONFUSED

IS JUST THAT MUM AND DAD WENT LEAD THEIR OWN LIVES.. NOT PASS AWAY

Aaron, Boo!,

Laresa, Yea!

This is an erotic literature site. You are fooling no one with your "bull" pretense.

waiting impatiently for you to continue this, great story so far!

RA

Super hot and great story with increasing cast. Very enjoyable and looking forward to next episode.

Pretty exciting, wonder why the woman doesnt either impale herself or tell the man to do her properly. Obviously theres something besides love [duh] going on here but im at a loss as to why they are arent loving the fucking out of ea other. the confusion is distracting/disappointing,...

Lots of feelings thoughts etc. Great story, excellently written. 5*s. rk

Its.... okay?

Nice hot scenes, and I did enjoy the open ending, can't wait to see who found Vladan in the dark woods . . .

An excellent addition to the story.

And now I am following even more writers. I'm enjoying this story quite a bit.

@PtmcPilot Thanks for reading! To answer your question: we agreed on the premise (well, mostly), but we're each moving the story forward in our own way. All characters may be used. We share the chapters before publishing for feedback and to check for consistency, but that's really...

I am enjoying the story, and I have a question. Are the many of you coordinating? Or are you picking up where the last bit left off and just going for it? Do you each have particular characters to hold to?

This series just keeps getting better and better!

What a strong sense of place you've managed to evoke. I had no idea about Keen's and the pipes.

Ooh, book lovers and theatrical fans! I like this. And thanks to @Devinter I know Keens is a real place - must try it next time I'm in NYC.

How to tie up all the story strands...

Thought I commented on this earlier. Apologies! It's a shame that the Chain Story section of the website gets so little traffic, because it's certainly an interesting concept and highly educational experience for us as authors to attempt something like this. However, feedback from...

Wonderful continuation to the story, Kellie. I enjoyed it immensely. You added so many new layers to the characters which made them come to life flawlessly, and I thoroughly enjoyed the little history lesson regarding Keens as well. Beautiful work, my friend.

Well developed, very arousing. Good work!

Yes, this works very well. I'm really enjoying this story.

The final version came together very nicely! Well done!

Beautiful. You have a way with characters that is nuanced and engaging.