Premise. Notes On "The Art of Dramatic Writing" by Lajos Egri.
Premise. Notes On "The Art of Dramatic Writing" by Lajos Egri.
Premise. Notes On "The Art of Dramatic Writing" by Lajos Egri.
Premises in plays:
Macbeth
Macbeth and Lady Macbeth, in their ruthless ambition to achieve their goal, decide to kill King
Duncan. Then, to strengthen himself in his position, Macbeth hires assassins to kill Banquo,
whom he fears. Later, he is forced to commit still more murders in order to entrench himself
more securely in the position he has reached through murder. Finally, the nobles and his own
subjects become so aroused that they rise against him, and Macbeth perishes as he lived—by
the sword. Lady Macbeth dies of haunting fear.
What can be the premise of this play? The question is, what is the motivating force? No doubt
it is ambition. What kind of ambition? Ruthless, since it is drenched in blood. Macbeth’s
downfall was foreshadowed in the very method by which he achieved his ambition. So, as we
see, the premise for Macbeth is “Ruthless ambition leads to its own destruction.”
Ghosts
The basic idea is heredity. The play grew out of a Biblical quotation which is the premise
“The sins of the fathers are visited on the children.” Every word uttered, every move made,
every conflict in the play, comes about because of this premise.”
You must have a premise—a premise which will lead you unmistakably to the goal your play
hopes to reach.
The author using a badly worded, false, or badly constructed premise finds himself filling space
and time with pointless dialogue—even action—and not getting anywhere because there is no
clear direction.
The structure of a premise:
These are only flat statements but they have all that is needed of a well-constructed premise:
character, conflict, and conclusion. The premise however, is still incomplete.
The author’s conviction is missing. He must take one side for the premise to spring to life.
Does egotism lead to loss of friends? Which side will you take?
We, the spectators of your play, do not necessarily need to agree with your conviction.
Through your play you must therefore prove to us the validity of your contention.
Premise construction:
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If you have a clear-cut premise, almost automatically a synopsis unrolls itself. You elaborate on
it, providing the minute details, the personal touches.
If you do choose the premise, “Great love defies even death,” you must believe in it.
The premise should be a conviction of your own, so that you may prove it wholeheartedly.
The premise will suggest the one and only road that you must take.
A young girl murders her mother. Horrible. But why? What were the steps that led her there?
The more the dramatist reveals, the better the play. The more you can reveal of the
environment, the physiology and the psychology of the murderer, and his or her personal
premise, the more successful you will be.
Everything in existence is closely related to everything else. You cannot treat any subject as
though it were isolated from the rest of life.
If the reader accepts our reasoning, he will drop the idea of writing a play about how someone
committed a perfect crime, and turn to why someone did.
The premise is not necessarily a universal truth. Poverty doesn’t always lead to crime, but if
you’ve chosen this premise, it does in your case. The same principle governs all premises.
The premise is the conception, the beginning of a play. The premise is a seed and it grows into
a plant that was contained in the original seed; nothing more, nothing less. The premise
should not stand out like a sore thumb, turning the characters into puppets and the conflicting
forces into a mechanical set-up. In a well-constructed play or story, it is impossible to denote
just where premise ends and story or character begins.
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