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    The poem describes a lone submarine drifting through the deep, dark ocean. It builds things but is constantly set back by storms that destroy its work. One day, the submarine considers exploring beyond the equator to find something new. However, another submarine stops it, saying they would have no home if it left. The submarine stays submerged, continuing its routine of building and being destroyed by storms.

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    The poem describes a lone submarine drifting through the deep, dark ocean. It builds things but is constantly set back by storms that destroy its work. One day, the submarine considers exploring beyond the equator to find something new. However, another submarine stops it, saying they would have no home if it left. The submarine stays submerged, continuing its routine of building and being destroyed by storms.

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    The poem describes a lone submarine drifting through the deep, dark ocean. It builds things but is constantly set back by storms that destroy its work. One day, the submarine considers exploring beyond the equator to find something new. However, another submarine stops it, saying they would have no home if it left. The submarine stays submerged, continuing its routine of building and being destroyed by storms.

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    Republic of the Philippines

    BATANGAS STATE UNIVERSITY


    Gov. Pablo Borbon Main II
    Alangilan, Batangas City

    LITERARY REFLECTION
    Lit. 102 – ASEAN LITERATURE
    A.Y. 2021-2022; 1st Semester

    Note: Copy/paste someone else’s work = NO CREDIT


    Copy a single line/verse to someone’s work without citation = NO CREDIT

    ● Use the template in answering the question.


    ● Use ARIAL or TIMES NEW ROMAN 12 (font style and size)
    ● Use ENGLISH/FILIPINO as the medium for this activity.
    ● Use YOUR NAME as the file name (Surname, First Name).
    ● Look for “LITERARY REFLECTION” folder on Google classroom (see classwork for more
    organized topics). It is where you upload your output. DO NOT FORGET to TURN IN.
    ● Submission is on or before September 23, 2021, Thursday until 8:00pm. Once submitted, you
    cannot resubmit your output to correct minor errors or to add something.
    ● See the attached rubrics.

    RUBRICS for Literary Reflectiuon

    Needs
    Unsatisfactory Satisfactory Outstanding
    Improvement
    CRITERIA
    2 7 10
    4

    - Content is - Content is not - Content is - Content is


    incomplete. comprehensive accurate and comprehensive,
    and /or persuasive. persuasive. accurate, and
    - Major points are not persuasive.
    clear. - Major points are - Major points are
    addressed, but not stated. - Major points are
    Content & -Specific examples well supported. stated clearly and are
    Development are not used. - Responses are well supported.
    - Responses are adequate and
    inadequate or do not address topic. - Responses are
    address topic. excellent, timely and
    - Content is clear. address topic.
    -Specific examples
    do not support topic. -Specific examples - Content is clear.
    are used.
    -Specific examples are
    used.

    - Structure of the - Structure is -Structure of the paper


    paper is not easy to mostly clear and is clear and easy to
    - Organization and follow. easy to follow. follow.
    structure detract from
    the message. - Transitions need - Transitions are - Transitions are
    improvement. present. logical and maintain
    Organization & - Writing is the flow of thought
    Structure disjointed and lacks - Conclusion is - Conclusion is throughout the paper.
    transition of missing, or if logical.
    thoughts. provided, does not - Conclusion is logical
    flow from the body and flows from the
    of the paper. body of the paper.

    -Writer's unique Writer's unique -Writer's voice and -Writer's distinct


    Originality
    perspective is not perspective is unique perspective voice and unique
    evident and approach somewhat evident. is evident; a perspective is very
    seems clichéd and /or Approach lacks creative and evident; a highly
    uninteresting. imagination. innovative creative and
    approach grabs innovative approach
    reader. grabs reader.

    Grammar, - Paper contains - Paper contains few - Rules of - Rules of grammar,


    Punctuation & numerous grammatical, grammar, usage, usage, and
    Spelling grammatical, punctuation and and punctuation punctuation are
    punctuation, and spelling errors. are followed with followed; spelling is
    spelling errors. minor errors. correct.

    Spelling is correct.

    Republic of the Philippines


    BATANGAS STATE UNIVERSITY
    Gov. Pablo Borbon Main Campus II
    Batangas City

    COLLEGE of INDUSTRIAL TECHNOLOGY


    Literary Reflection #2: Inside Submarines

    NAME: Hercules M. Biacora DATE:


    Yr.&Sect: ELET 3102 Score:

    1. What is the underlying meaning of the poem? Reflect and give your own personal point about
    it.

    I can relate this poem to a story of a man of struggles. A man whose life enough is hard, full of
    challenges and obstacles. This poem describes this man as a lone submarine fighting for dear life
    on a deep, dark ocean. Traveling without a set destination, drifting along with the waves. The
    man tries to live his life despite how hard and painful it may seem, trying to have a positive
    outlook and hope for better things. He lives and builds and then lives again and builds things that
    he was hoping for. It was his routine. But life is not that easy. Every time he stops, there is
    something that is waiting for him. A storm. A storm that was ready to trample the things that he
    has worked on, the things that he built. He stumbles and tries to look for help. But in the raging
    storm, there was no one to help him because the others were also busy trying to save their own
    lives. Once the storm subsides and he can see the debris of his work everywhere, he tries to stand
    up and put it back together. But the truth is, it was not the first time that the storm has knocked
    down his works. It happens now and then as if it was a part of his routine. But one day while
    looking at the debris of his works, he had thought of something. What if he tries something new
    and gets out of his usual routine. In the poem there was a line where the author said ‘Once I was
    at the equator, trying to slice the earth in half’, this was just like what the man had thought. What
    if’s was circling his mind. “What if for once, I let myself be free and less miserable?”, “What if
    for once I try to explore and get out of this submarine?” He made up his mind and tries to get up
    and explore. He had set up a new goal. He was ready. But then something pulled him back into
    the deep, dark ocean. Someone held onto his hands and said “If you do that friend, we would fall
    and won’t have any place to live.” With that, he was back again at the deep ocean. What do you
    think would have happened if no one pulled him back? If no one held his hand? If that was the
    case, he might have had found a new world, where his what if’s will be answered. But he stayed,
    and let himself be submerged again into the deepest part of the ocean.

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