Short Story Building and Rubric
Short Story Building and Rubric
Character
Appearance
Actions
What the Character Says
Thoughts
Likes
Dislikes
Dreams
Fears
What Others Think of
the Character
Prewriting Rubric
Character # 1
3 2 1 0
Character Successfully Gave Barely Did not give
Development gave enough details to gave any details to create
(x2) details to create a details to an effective
create a character create a character
character character
Completeness Filled in all Filled in Did not Did not fill in
spots on the most spots fill in chart
chart on the more
chart than half
of the
spots
Character #
3 2 1 0
Character Successfully Gave Barely Did not give
Development gave enough details to gave any details to create
(x2) details to create a details to an effective
create a character create a character
character character
Completeness Filled in all Filled in Did not Did not fill in
spots on the most spots fill in chart
chart on the more
chart than half
of the
spots
DRAFTING
Before you begin drafting your story, keep your central
crisis in mind and shape your story around it. An effective
plot has the following components:
Climax
Exposition Resolution
To get started:
♦ Create your own Plot Diagram and Timeline
♦ Fill in the events of your story from beginning to end
♦ Correctly identify which events pertain to the central
plot
♦ Include details from your story
Once you are finished with your plot diagram, you may
begin writing your rough draft. Use your plot diagram and
character sketches in your writing process.
Plot Diagram
Rubric
3 2 1 0
Presentation Plot Plot Plot diagram Plot
diagram is diagram is is diagram is
neat, organized, unorganized, not legible
organized can be and can be
and easy to followed followed
follow with
difficulty
Events Events are One event Two or more Events are
displayed is not in events are not given
in logical logical not in logical in logical
order order order order to
the story
Parts of Plot Successfully Labeled Labeled and Did not
labeled and and identified label parts
identified identified parts of plot of plot on
all parts of parts of with 2 or timeline
plot plot with more errors
one error
Details Successfully Gave Barely gave Did not
gave details to any details give
enough enhance to enhance details to
details to plot plot enhance
enhance plot
plot
REVISION
Now that you have written your rough draft, you will
participate in a peer editing activity. For this activity you are
to:
♦ Exchange papers (copies) with all members of your team;
read through your team mates’ essays carefully
♦ Correct any grammatical errors as you read each essay
♦ When you are done, fill out the Rubric for Assessment
♦ Once the rubric has been completed pass it back to
your partner and discuss the ratings you have given
♦ REMEMBER to provide constructive comments to
your partner
Rubric for Peer Assessment
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