2019 HSC English Advanced Band 4/5

Question 6 Paper 1 Sample 2

Annotation:

The response demonstrates a detailed knowledge of the text. It

explores the extent to which the human experiences in the text invite

the reader to reconsider an understanding of love and the ways in

which different responses to texts are constructed. Techniques related

to the dramatic text type are discussed but the analysis lacks depth.
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Question 6 Paper 1 Sample 2

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