Talk:When We Left Earth: The NASA Missions/GA1

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 20:47, 23 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

Reviewing later.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 20:47, 23 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

• This is a good external link if not something that could be referenced.
  • Added to external links Kees08 (Talk)
• "When We Left Earth: The NASA Missions or NASA's Greatest Missions: When We Left Earth in the UK" Parentheses needed for the second part?
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• News & Documentary Emmy Award should be linked.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
  • Is there a better site to verify the nomination? The composer's own site isn't the most reliable one.
    • Agreed, found one from the academy to use. Left in the other one, but we can delete it if we need to. Kees08 (Talk)
• "The series is narrated by actor Gary Sinise, who played astronaut Ken Mattingly in the 1995 film Apollo 13, and executive produced by Richard Dale and Bill Howard, edited by Peter Parnham and Simon Holland." Split this into two sentences.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• "Music and sound was" were?
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• The episode should use the {{Episode table}} templates, and more information needs to be filled out on them.
  • Part 4 should be expanded to a few more sentences.
• Reference 3 needs a publisher.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• Reference 8 is dead and needs expanding.
  • Removed, I will have to try to find something to replace it or remove the info. The archived version did not have the info it was supposed to. Kees08 (Talk)
• Reference 9 redirects something else that has nothing to do with the series now.
  • Added archived version Kees08 (Talk)

A bit of work to do.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:33, 18 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

As we discussed in IRC, it will take a bit to address the last point, because I will have to rewatch the whole series (yay!). So this nom may stay open for awhile, but do not panic, it is being worked. Kees08 (Talk) 06:48, 19 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

Need a bit more time with this. Kees08 (Talk) 23:51, 11 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

Done with the remaining issues. Kees08 (Talk) 21:49, 19 April 2018 (UTC)Reply