 | Karl Thielscher is currently a Football good article nominee. Nominated by BeanieFan11 (talk) at 02:54, 26 October 2024 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria. Further reviews are welcome from any editor who has not contributed significantly to this article (or nominated it), and can be added to the review page, but the decision whether or not to list the article as a good article should be left to the first reviewer. Short description: American football player (1895–1990) |
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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 02:54, 26 October 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 04:00, 26 October 2024 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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b (citations to reliable sources):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
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- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
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- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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- Overall:
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- Add period after Dartmouth in lead.
- Lead needs expanded.
- Any source for Barney being his nickname?
- Any source for "Sr."
- Add "Karl Leavitt Thielscher" to the body since that was his birth name.
- New high school infobox formatting.
- His PFA profile says he was with Dartmouth from 1913 to 1916 and was a three-year letterman. Add that to the body and infobox.
- Added cats: Baseball players from Massachusetts, American military personnel of World War I, National Football League officials
- Added commonscatinline.
- Link team captain in early life.
- "returning to his alma mater as an assistant coach" what sports?
- Need to add coaching cats
- is there a link for Aviation Corps?
- "Thielscher was given the rank of lieutenant." No source
- Is there a link for Camp Robinson?
- That note needs sources.
- link fair catch.
- "After APFA official Eugene W. Garson was severely injured in a Buffalo All-Americans game" The heck? That's gonna need some details, lol.
- "He officiated their game against the Columbus Panhandles, a 38–0 win for the All-Americans." No source.
- "In 1923, Thielscher returned to his alma mater of Dartmouth College to assist the coaching staff" What sports?
- "both of which" shouldn't that say "both of whom"?
- "couple had two sons, Karl Jr., and David, both of which played college football at Dartmouth College." Remove College and just put Dartmouth, Dartmouth College was already spelled out two sentences before.
- "Madison Avenue Presbyterian Church" looks like there is a link for that (Madison Avenue Presbyterian Church)
Nice research again. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 04:15, 26 October 2024 (UTC)