Talk:Escors/GA1

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Reviewer: Grandiose (talk · contribs) 16:33, 21 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

I'm afraid I do not believe that this article is a good article at the moment:

• I've added several citation needed tags where they are necessary, and these should be addressed. This is necessary to ensure verifiability.
• The lead is too short and does not adequately summarise the article (WP:LEAD)
• File:Escors blason knight order.tif is a TIF and I do not believe it is the uploader's own work, as claimed.
• File:Carta Rey de Navarra.tif and other images are incorrectly licensed: they must have a copyright tag indicating their copyright status in their home country (e.g. Spain).
• Some of the "prominent member" biographies are rather short, so it isn't clear why they are included. An article like this has to tread between too much and too little detail, so the choice of information is important in achieving the correct scope.
• I've tweaked the headers, but the prose is in places rather suspect. You could consider a copyedit from the Guild.
• I have not conducted any copyright checks for these reasons.

Feel free to renominate the article when these issues have been addressed – it is non-prejudicial. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 16:33, 21 June 2012 (UTC)Reply