User talk:CC-Berenice

Hello, CC-Berenice, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions.

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Hi Eddie thank you for your answer. I am a freelancer and the account is mine, personal account, and I am the only person who will use it. In the meanwhile I was reading all the infos and understood better. I disclosed employer and client (there is no affiliation, I don't use websites or anything similar) in my personal page and in talk page of the draft on my personal space, as it was said in the page about COI. I didn't publish anything in the Wikipedia space, at the moment I am writing the draft in my personal space. I read I have to write a draft and then ask someone to review it. Am I doing wrong? When I finish to write my draft so can I send to you for a review before submission? Thank you so much! CC-Berenice (talk) 15:32, 23 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

If you want someone to review your draft when you submit, you can just hit the blue "submit for review" button on the top of the page. That is more or less how you should be going about things. I'm really pressed for time at the moment so don't think that I will be able to have a look myself, unfortunately. Eddie891 ^Talk _Work 12:35, 24 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I finished to write my draft in my personal space. In my previous answer I explained better my case.

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Could you help me to see if it is everything ok with the article? User:CC-Berenice/sandbox/Vittorio Emanuele Falsitta And if is it everything ok with my declaration of COI? I link here where I wrote the disclose: Talk page of my draft: User talk:CC-Berenice/sandbox/Vittorio Emanuele Falsitta, pesonal page: User:CC-Berenice, and also in the notes when I save my draft. CC-Berenice (talk) 16:06, 23 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The disclosure on your user page appears to be sufficient.

You are fortunate in your choice of subjects. Falsitta, by virtue of having been elected to the state legistlature, is deemed notable according to WP:NPOL. A biography about him, however, must still meet the rules for WP:BLP among which is a requirement that essentially every statement is attributed to a source via inline citations. You still have some work to do to ensure this is true in your draft. It will make the job of reviewers easier if you can link to on-line sources as much as possible; some of your current citations lack sufficient bibliographical data for just any reader to try to find them. And it is beyond our power as humble Wikipedia editors to list a person's works and by pointing to them suggest the list contributes to their notability. You need to look for secondary sources to support the importance or impact of these works and of their author. — jmcgnh^{(talk) (contribs)} 03:11, 24 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Thank you so much for your feedback. As someone else told me, Italian Wikipedia and the English one are quite different. So as you suggested, I would search for more on-line sources and check the rules you told me. Thank you again for the help! CC-Berenice (talk) 09:02, 24 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I took a quick look at the (not yet) draft article that you have created (and its Italian counterpart). English Language Wikipedia's rules may be somewhat more limited than in other languages, but I don't see any *large* flaws in the articles. Having served a term in the Chamber of Deputies (a National Level Legislature), he easily meets the notability requirements. A *few* tweeks I'd suggest.

1. ) The membership in the Sovereign Military Order of Malta needs a reference and I don't think belongs in the Lede. I'd suggest finding a reference and moving it to a personal section or into the other activities.
2. ) There is no problems including the actual names of the bills like on the Italian version.
3. ) The list of publications *may* be too long, not sure.

Thank you for the creation, please submit as a draft. Naraht (talk) Naraht (talk) 17:11, 23 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Thank you for your time and suggestions! I would do as you said and improve it. CC-Berenice (talk) 08:57, 24 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]