Talk:Lawrence Holofcener

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Was asked by Kittybrewster to do a quick review of this article. Here's some problems I see

• Don't place external links in the text. If something isn't notable enough for a Wikipedia article, don't link it period. Relevent external links should be linked in an "external links" section at the end. See Wikipedia:External links for more info.
• Reference 7 seems to be misformatted

Otherwise, this looks like a good start for an article. Some of the text could probably stand to be expanded on, but you work with the source material you can find. --Jayron32 16:35, 15 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I also had a look after a request and appears well written and imformative, content seems to be well supported by a variety of decent externals. I removed a utube link that imo was not an official upload and therefore had possible copyright issues. Off2riorob (talk) 17:46, 15 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I also had a quick look, I have no major criticisms except that some of the wikilinks direct the disambiguation pages (particularly "Without You I'm Nothing" and "Too Close for Comfort"), these should be redirected to the correct page. Rockpocket 16:32, 29 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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