User talk:CleanBean/Sleepwalking

i added a few minor additions in {} to let you know some areas I thought needed rephrasing or citing. Otherwise I think you did a great job! Casseygray (talk) 19:08, 16 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, Cleanbean! I peer-reviewed your sandbox draft. Your statement is concise and well-informative. If you have a question about my comment, please don't hesitate to reach out! Uiseon1012 (talk) 00:33, 18 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I changed a few word structures to make them more public and less academic, but I'm struggling to find a way to state the study I read without actually using the words "study" and "research." I'm not sure how to word it into a statement or fact. CleanBean (talk) 18:14, 19 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]