Talk:Women Deliver
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Requested move
[edit]- The following discussion is an archived discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.
The result of the move request was: moved, clearly a proper noun. (non-admin closure) Jenks24 (talk) 04:48, 9 February 2012 (UTC)
Women deliver → Women Deliver – I titled the page wrong and it should be "Women Deliver" with the "Deliver" also capitalized. Thank you for your help in capitalizing this letter. --Jessicadirocco (talk) 23:34, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.
Some proposed changes
[edit]| This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. Per: WP:CLOSEPARAPHRASE. |
Information to be added or removed:
REMOVE: "Women Deliver is a global advocacy organization that works to generate political commitment and financial investment for fulfilling Millennium Development Goal 5—reducing maternal mortality and achieving universal access to reproductive health.[1]"
ADD:"Women Deliver is a global advocacy organization that that works to generate political commitment and financial investment for gender equality and the health and rights of girls and women."
Explanation of issue: The organization has expanded on its scope of work and advocacy mission beyond "Millennium Development Goal 5 – reducing maternal mortality and achieving universal access to reproductive health."
References supporting change:
Ellen Wulfhorst,"Royals and celebrities put spotlight on global efforts to boost women," Thomson Reuters Foundation, September 26, 2018[1]
Christin Roby, “Women Deliver launches local Deliver for Good campaigns,” Devex, November 28, 2019. [2] 02:33, 29 May 2019 (UTC)Rmilkovich (talk) 02:33, 29 May 2019 (UTC)
References
- ^ https://www.reuters.com/article/us-women-un-stars/royals-and-celebrities-put-spotlight-on-global-efforts-to-boost-women-idUSKCN1M638J
- ^ https://www.devex.com/news/women-deliver-launches-local-deliver-for-good-campaigns-93906?mkt_tok=eyJpIjoiTVRnNFpEa3lOMk0zTUdVdyIsInQiOiJBTkZaMXZxWVwvN3c2NE9qc2J5RVFwUWpSMkp5NmNRTkF2d2FMOGJrXC8xNXVNWUcxM3JJWFUxOTFvS1dBbHkyMlhzWXFCMVNSTXhFMnlIWkVYTUpTVGRld3pFWGhkWkVXZ3lmQmI4Y1EycGJ4U05UTGlFYjNkWEg4NnZKVHhlWCtiIn0%3D&utm_campaign=newswire&utm_medium=email&utm_source=newsletter
Reply 29-MAY-2019
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- The requested prose is insufficiently paraphrased from the source material. While the requested prose does improve on certain aspects of the wording used in the lead, it still copies a large portion of the phrasing directly from the source. All additions to an article ought to be placed using an editor's own words and phrasing, per WP:CLOSEPARAPHRASE.
Regards, Spintendo 04:59, 29 May 2019 (UTC)