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so basically, after the truth, aubrey and her trust is destroyed and she becomes depressed. it switches in between kel trying to get her out or her house and aubrey wallowing away. she eventually comes out.
i don't like how juvenile kel's dialogue sounds. in this fic he has a high vocabulary, but he also goes: "noooooooooooooo. you're not my daaddddddddddddd." that is actual dialogue 💀
so, i'm planning on publishing ANOTHER old fic i found.
Maybe you could edit it? I mean, it sounds really good, I'd read it. Maybe if you fixed it a little and changed anything you don't like, you could still publish it.
Also YES GIVE ME OLD CONTENT
I was reading through my drafts for my original works, and I found a story about a princess in love with another princess and trying to protect her love and stuff, just generally being cute and in love and hoping the second princess would notice her. It's cute and all until you realize that they're liTERALLY SISTERS I SWEAR THE FIRST PRINCESS, THE ONE WHO'S IN LOVE, IS LITERALLY THE YOUNGER SISTER OF HER LOVE INTREST I DON'T REMEMBER WRITING THIS AND I DON'T REMEMBER THE INCEST
I DON'T KNOW WHY OR HOW I DON'T EVEN THINK IT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE INCEST BUT THE WAY SHE WAS LOOKING AT HER SISTER LIKE "Father picked the worst batch of men he could have. I couldn't let any of her suitors have her. She was mine and mine alone. My sweet older sister." liKE BITCH INCEST YANDERE WHAT WHY
Thank you. You are truly kind. Actually, if you really want, I think I might have deleted it (above is a recreation but it's basically what happened) but I could see if I still have it and send it to you so I can suffer and you can laugh at how weird it is
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