Comment on CAMILUMITY: Camila's Release (LAST UPDATE SOON)

  1. congratulations on the 100+ Kubos it seems that the fandom loves Camila...hope you could rest and I look forward to your next story..I don't know if you take my advice for the context for the next story Veeluz and the roll game of nurses and possibly a story where it follows after the Veeluz story and before the Camilumity story to help continuity

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    1. In fact, Veeluz's story is from the timeskip where they are both 18, and it would occur after VeeLuz/Camila

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      1. I'm curious if you'll continue with your break or we'll have that story soon?

        but even if I look forward to the VeeLuz story, I remember well I think you had told me that it was where Luz manages to partially recover her transformation as a Titan, the truth is I have nothing to suggest other than that you can play with the detail that Vee is She's developed more over the years (you know now she's got sexier legs and a bigger butt) you're easily the best-worked Veeluz and she's got great dynamics.

        The other thing I suggested to you is that there should be a fan fic prior to the Camila/VeeLuz story to see how Camila got 100% involved in the "relaxation" games and that now she is willing to have a threesome with Vee and Luz..

        The idea is a second part of the Camilumity where they want to pretend that nothing happened, there is no shame but at the end of part 1 I remember that Luz, Amity and Camila had agreed that nothing would change and that it would only be something for a single occasion, basically everything would explode at a girls' night out for movies, with things like sexy pajamas that let you see cleavage and the color of the bra and shorts, lewd jokes about what they did that night and how little by little they get excited until the video is seen that Amity recorded from the Noceda scissors, that would be the moment where she finally has another threesome that night with a fully involved Camila, an Amity who wants to come back to play more with those tits and that big ass and Luz who doesn't mind accepting the incest wants his "sexy mommy" and to play with the fact that now they don't refer to a Milf at a general level but directly to Camila and the funny thing is that here they openly accept that this is an incestuous relationship and that mom and daughter are naughty and much more naughty for having a threesome with another woman, leaving everything ready with a horny Camila for the story VeeLuz/Camila...I clarify that they are just notes I like your work and you are free to ignore me I will look forward to your next one with great enthusiasm project.

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        1. As of now, my break is over, so I'll start writing soon.

          days ago it was my birthday, so that's why I didn't reply.

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          1. first I hope you had a happy birthday and seriously had a good rest.. second, would you write that second part of Camilumity?

            I fully understand if you refuse, I am already VERY grateful with this first part, the best fic of this type that I have read and I will be here waiting for your next work.

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            1. Thank you! I will write the other part of Camilumity, it is a story that I have planned. but first I want to write the other one by VeeLuz, and the one by camila/VeeLuz

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              1. Well, it's great, I'm really excited about your next works and the proposals are heard very well .... Do you have an estimate of when they could be published?

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                1. I could not estimate, although remember that I do not think that it will be as long as the others, but I will make sure that it has quality.

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                  1. Well friend, do it as and at the pace that you feel comfortable with, I am added to find your first job Veeluz and follow you because your stories have very good quality and rhythm, I will be on the lookout

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                    1. thx

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