Comment on CAMILUMITY: Camila's Release (LAST UPDATE SOON)

  1. Enenhra Thu 10 Aug 2023 04:29AM UTC

    thanks and is good have you back, even for a few days. I await criticism of the update. I'm giving myself some time before writing everything that comes

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    1. CHACA CHACA (Guest) Thu 10 Aug 2023 07:21AM UTC

      I am glad that you like my return and that my long comments do not bother you, but a good job deserves recognition and that all the good he did is praised, I will discuss everything in more detail in the other comment but in summary it is a 10/10 and Just as I think you have the best fan fic NSWF Veeluz I think you have the best Camilumity, the final kiss scene is very good, an excellent way to close this "relaxation" section, the only flaw I saw in it is what another person told you The last round of sex, specifically Camila and Luz's scissoring, should be a little more extensive and lassive. It's the great climax, it's basically Luz fucking her mother because they rub their pussies in that position, so I think that's where you should take the opportunity for Luz to show her excitement at wanting to give her the best fuck that Camila has had in a long time, like spreading camila's legs so that they can rub each other better, rubbing their tits together, tongue kissing while they fuck and a good lassive conversation about what they crossed this limit of incest and how they love this sensation that level of intensity and joking that Luz showed with Amity at the beginning or with Vee when I fuck her in the bathroom is the grand finale and Luz personally wants to give it that to be a perfect story, (you owe me hate for telling you a defect after updating XD 😆 sorry sorry I'm just mentioning it, it's your decision if you think it should be added or not I don't think I can ask for more, your work is already the best I've read) but seriously it's an incredible job and you are the best and this fan fic shows the great level you have with so much detail and dedication

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      1. Enenhra Thu 10 Aug 2023 10:00PM UTC

        New Update!

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