Comment on CAMILUMITY: Camila's Release (LAST UPDATE SOON)

  1. CHACA CHACA (Guest) Fri 04 Aug 2023 01:58AM UTC

    Your story is a 10/10, it's that I liked several things, which is why I wanted to see the probability if it could be extended more and add some new scenes, an update of a version 2.0 of this fic with all this new content

    1-At the beginning when Amity and Luz are talking about Camila and they bring up the subject, it would be good if they had a more lassive conversation, describe what they like about Camila's physique and that it excites them and has a second round of scissors for the emotion of the possibility of having a threesome with a Milf

     

    2-That the scene when they go to talk to her to make the proposal is not immediately, that several days have passed and in that period of time prepare the ground for Camila to see them with different eyes, Amity and Luz doing poses and creating situations lasivas, by "accident" ending up with Camila in suggestive positions, by "accident" being able to touch her butt and by "accident" Camila sees them have an intense section of tongue kissing, and later they go to talk to her and discover that Camila they lowered her work pay, this being the last stimulus they need to convince her

    -In the scene where they already proposed a threesome to her, she should be hotter 🔥, they start kissing her neck and then she starts touching softly until moving her hands to her ass and her tits, Camila finally gets carried away by the situation and has a section of kisses starts out soft and then becomes more passionate until they move on to tongue kisses with open mouths on the sofa and a Three-way Kiss while Amity and Luz the whole section was touching Camila's ass and tits, when Camila This horny guy brings the fun to his room (from here everything happens as normal)

    In the scene where Camila and Luz are giving her the incestuous show, there is also a scene where Camila gets in a position on all 4 legs and Luz behind her to pretend that she is failing her and Luz makes a couple of comments if she likes what go

    That there are more scenes where Luz and Amity touch their asses and sometimes spank Camila several times, it was shown that they like asses and they will take advantage of everything they can to play with the biggest one they have ever seen XD, for example when they suck Camila's tits don't miss the opportunity to touch her butt

    In the scene where Amity milks Camila it can be longer, where Camila breastfeeds both of them at the same time, spills milk on both their faces, both girls can take turns rubbing their faces on that pair of tits and finally Camila decides to suck their own tits taking advantage of how big they are to excite the girls and make signs for the three of them to share one of their tits and have a tongue battle in the same person until they get milk

    Three-way Kiss scenes can be hotter and little longer

    That there is another scene where Amity also wants the pleasure that Camila feels on her face but positions herself so that she is on the edge of the bed so that Luz can join in so Amity eats her pussy and Luz both want to share for the second time. see that big ass

    Another section of scissors between Camila and Luz in the middle of the story where Camila is on top so Luz can suck her tits and grope her ass and is in a position for Amity to feast on both pussies at the same time.

    Already in the final round when Amity is sitting in the face of Camila and Luz doing the scissors take advantage of the fact that she is having an intense section of kisses

    At the end of the story, when Camila is masturbating and has her climax, Amity and Luz discover her and there the story ends, hinting that she will have another round.

    The reason for adding more scenes and some more intense ones is because Camila has been without sexual liberation for 15 years and she is also taking the opportunity to let herself be carried away by lust and that these two horny teenagers full of energy give her pleasure and Amity and Luz are They are also quite intense because it is a fantasy that they never thought they could come true and they want it to the maximum, especially Luz, because of the incest issue, she did not expect the sexy Milf that is her mother to accept

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    1. Enenhra Fri 04 Aug 2023 03:04AM UTC

      There are really many things that I don't add, really many things that you said are similar to what you said, they always appear in my mind but then I don't write them for some reason, maybe I consider it filler... or maybe I think it would be too much? I have no idea... but it would be great to put all that in an update

      things like the 2 girlfriends opening the door when camila climaxes, Luz pretending to fuck camila like a doggy style, or even the seduction one.

      I'll sure be updating soon after the weekend.

      Would you be interested in hearing details of all my ideas about upcoming fics?

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      1. CHACA CHACA (Guest) Fri 04 Aug 2023 03:17AM UTC

        I don't consider it filler at all and I think it's funny how we think in a similar way, I would love for you to integrate all these new scenes into an update, I don't want to force you but it would be possible to have that "expansion" as soon as possible, I don't know if it's possible tomorrow taking advantage of the fact that I have your attention and that the fan fic is finished and this would be a "DLC" XD before you resume the "Lumity Amantes" fic and lose you for a long time, he had you quite retained with his story I think it's fair that Now I have my turn 😆 .... I would love for you to tell me more about your next works

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        1. Enenhra Fri 04 Aug 2023 03:28AM UTC

          Well, really, I could put several things that you tell me, although I could use as an excuse that the shock and the fact that Camila had not done this for 15 years and she was not used to it again, they did not do most of the things, what's more, now that camila would be more used to, perhaps the rest of the things that you have asked me if they can be added, due to the emotion that Luz and Amity would have to have another opportunity and that they would take advantage of it and enjoy it to the maximum possible.

          Before showing you the ideas, I just want to ask something out of curiosity, have you seen the drawings of the endnotes? maybe that made for a better experience reading this knowing what the situation looked like

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          1. CHACA CHACA (Guest) Fri 04 Aug 2023 04:54AM UTC

            If the drawings were a good idea, if it helps the experience to have a visual reference, I think the excuse for integrating all the new content may be that Camila simply got carried away, she just wants to have good orgasms and the one with the most experience in it Lesbian sex with the girls so I did what Amity and Luz told them since this was their fantasy, again I would really love it if you would add everything new that I mentioned to you in an update as quickly as possible tomorrow if possible I loved your work and I want to take advantage of the fact that I have your attention before you continue with another story (I think it's my turn now to have you retained with a story 🤣), now that you have other ideas that you wanted to tell.

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            1. Enenhra Fri 04 Aug 2023 05:27AM UTC

              I'm going to be a little late tomorrow because I'll be doing the 4th chapter of Fic lumity: mistress. since I have already had 3 days off and today I had another.

              Sure, I'll do the updates before writing the other fic.

              however there are some that I want to leave for the sequel.

               

              I will continue writing. This weekend it will be difficult to have the story, but the following week it will most likely be there, because remember that it won't be too long like the ones I did before.

              I really hope making the Lumity/Veesha one will be chaos to speak of. Although Veesha's is still missing, it was one of the first ones I told you I would do

              DETAIL, everyone is aware that there is a security camera watching them, but since Masha knows how to take care of that, they will "selfishly" save the video and delete it from the GHS data, and send it to the chat group.

              I am already doing the Lumity one, since it is the one that I am currently updating until I reach chapter 5.

              the other Lumity is also with camila (with which I will allow myself to have more sex scenes, since this same fic has focused on camila's experience, (in fact this is a reason why I thought that I was not going to convince you completely this fanfic)) because in this one lumity will have more interaction but even so camila will have the "advantage" that these things they do are no longer new.

              Detail: as you already know, they will have costumes but they will be naked little by little.

              VeeLuz/Camila will be quite similar to this (except for the fact that Camila is already more confident with this and with herself)

              The most interesting detail is Vee's abilities witnessed in previous fics, which will give Camila a new experience.

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              1. CHACA CHACA (Guest) Fri 04 Aug 2023 05:47AM UTC

                I guess it will only be waiting to see when that update will be and if the end is VERY GOOD, that's why I ask you if you can add all those new scenes and expand the other thing that I mentioned.

                I'm curious about how chaotic it will be to have at 4 in the fan fic Lumity/Veesha, I'm sure Masha will be quite crafty.

                As soon as Veeluz/Camila had some ideas in mind that you might be interested in, Vee notices that there is a change in behavior between Luz and her mother could be said to be more horny especially in Camila that with the new confidence she had after her "section to relieve stress" she even likes to move in a way that highlights her butt and that Luz can indulge herself by having good angles...And what On one occasion in the morning when Camila slept with short shorts Luz loved having that view that she went from just touching to talking to Camila that they have a quickie in the kitchen and she settled down to be able to eat his ass and that's where she sees the finds and finds out that now mom will also join the games.

                As for the Lumity/Camila with the costumes of Azura and Hecate, I think it could have been after the battle against Belos and the salvation of the Islands that night knowing everything that happened to have a roll game in the Noceda house where an inhabitant of each world a human and a witch want to give a "special reward" to the good witch Luzura for saving them all.

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                1. Enenhra Fri 04 Aug 2023 05:58AM UTC

                  It's only been 1 day and it has already surpassed "The evil doppelganger encounter" in kudos. I don't know what the hell happened there with my first story, but it's okay. your ideas are very good

                  And I still haven't mentioned the new VeeLuz fic. which takes place in the time before Luz leaves for college. and I also mentioned before that there was another one which includes the titan form of Luz.

                  oh and a curious fact, do you remember that I told you that your username seemed to be Spanish? I remember now, that it was because in Spanish there is a term that is "Hacer el chaca chacha" in English: Make the Chaca chaca, and with chaca chaca it refers to sex xD

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                  1. CHACA CHACA (Guest) Fri 04 Aug 2023 06:06AM UTC

                    Well, it's great that you have more kubos with the Veeluz before Luz goes to university. I have no ideas but I'm also looking forward to it, ask... when could the update be with all the ideas that I mentioned? I swear that I didn't know that the name I have means is XD I just copied it to another user I thought they were random words Jajjajaj

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                    1. Enenhra Fri 04 Aug 2023 06:18AM UTC

                      I would say that this term is also somewhat random, so there is no problem XD.

                      surely the update will be on Friday, although it may be that I publish late because of the Lumity fic... or if not, it's Saturday night.

                      Veeluz's fic, it will be a fic where after graduating Vee wants to do a role play of Vee, she would have to forcefully approve Luz in her class, you know how that will be resolved XD.

                      and the one that I will write shortly is one where they are also both 18 years old but, DETAIL: during the time skip (where Luz had already turned 16 and up) they had not had sex. and after a moment of vulnerability in a massage for Vee, Luz gets the idea to put on Camila's vet outfit and role-play with Vee in her basilisk form.

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                      1. CHACA CHACA (Guest) Fri 04 Aug 2023 06:24AM UTC

                        really if you are great for agreeing to do this expansion of the fan fic Lumity / Camila ..... as soon as the Veeluz / Camila that kitchen scene where Vee discovers them is to show the effect that Camila left on Luz and see how she left a teenager wanting her, it was one thing to allow Luz to let her touch her occasionally but seeing how Luz got when she saw her in short shorts and almost begging her to let him eat her ass ends up confirming how sexy she is and I think Vee She is excited for the first time to describe the Milf that Camila is and to know that now she is also playing games, everything the Noceda sisters want to do to their mom will be interesting.

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                        1. Enenhra Fri 04 Aug 2023 06:28AM UTC

                          I guess my list is now on.

                          1 updates to this fic.

                          2 the Veesha fanfic that I have had for months and I still haven't continued it again XD

                          3 the Vee/Luz massage fic.

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                          1. CHACA CHACA (Guest) Fri 04 Aug 2023 06:43AM UTC

                            everything sounds great the truth will be fun to see Vee's rookie stage in sexual issues in the story Vessha, please please 🙏 try to publish the update on Friday I know it's very annoying but now I may have to be the one who has to disappear and Friday is a perfect date for me

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                            1. Enenhra Fri 04 Aug 2023 06:30PM UTC

                              updating now....just wait a minutes

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                              1. CHACA CHACA (Guest) Fri 04 Aug 2023 07:16PM UTC

                                You're the best

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                                1. Enenhra Fri 04 Aug 2023 07:27PM UTC

                                  I added the conversation, now i add more, I didn't want to add all at the same time to have more content little by little XP

                                  I don't know if after today you will disappear or if in a few hours you will, I will try to add as much as possible, before attending to the fic Lumity Mistress

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                                  1. CHACA CHACA (Guest) Fri 04 Aug 2023 07:43PM UTC

                                    You are seriously amazing for doing this and I don't know exactly how long I have to be gone but I hope you can add all the additional content it would be great to retire and have it be the last thing I read for a while, you are so talented and you have a way! INCREDIBLE! to create chemistry between characters.

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                                    1. Enenhra Fri 04 Aug 2023 08:01PM UTC

                                      thanks and a little ask. with camila in suggestive poses, do you mean that, (for example) Luz and amity ask camila to pick up something from the ground and that they can see her bending over and things like that?

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                                      1. CHACA CHACA (Guest) Fri 04 Aug 2023 08:15PM UTC

                                        yes, Amity and Luz also put themselves in suggestive poses so that Camila sees them in order to make Camila interested, remember all the new hottest scene when they do the ratio and everything else

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                                        1. Enenhra Fri 04 Aug 2023 08:32PM UTC

                                          I have to attend to the fic lumity I'll put the rest later Sorry D''x

                                          I hope you do well, and when you return you can enjoy

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                                          1. CHACA CHACA (Guest) Fri 04 Aug 2023 08:37PM UTC

                                            It hurts, but I also understand it, I hope you can add later since I will be able to be there today, I don't know if you can complete it on Saturday since I will be able to be there that day (although in a more limited way) and there I am I'll be going for a while, now it's my turn to disappear XD, seriously you're the best for writing this story and taking the trouble to keep listening

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