Comment on CAMILUMITY: Camila's Release (LAST UPDATE SOON)

  1. CHACA CHACA (Guest) Thu 03 Aug 2023 09:20AM UTC

    friend this is just perfect 👌, the only thing I will mention is if there is no way to add some more sections of Three-way Kiss that the only detail for everything else is incredible, but I will talk more in detail about everything you did well in another comment because if it is incredible

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    1. Enenhra Thu 03 Aug 2023 05:22PM UTC

      ok I wait for your criticism

      Oh and I decided to focus on Camila's experience. and the lust that the 3 had, maybe that's why there were only 3-way kisses

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      1. CHACA CHACA (Guest) Thu 03 Aug 2023 06:08PM UTC

        That's why it's the only detail that I can criticize... you managed to show the lust of the 3 of them very well, that's why it makes me strange that there was only one Three-way Kiss scene the first time I understand that one would ask for it for the new but with how horny she was and the phrase "camila really likes Amity and Luz's tongue" in that triple kiss they would do it more times in "Estras and relaxation" with Vee and Luz you did it in an incredible way in that detail with several sections that showed the lust of the Nocedas sisters, that's why I was wondering if you could add more moments of Three-way Kiss in the fan fic ... sorry for looking at bad things with all the effort you gave to it because everything The rest is perfect 👌 (there is also another very small detail in the scene when Camila is convinced to join but I will mention that in a more complete review)

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        1. Enenhra Thu 03 Aug 2023 06:22PM UTC

          No problem, now I add. xd

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        2. Enenhra Thu 03 Aug 2023 07:08PM UTC

          UPADTE: the kisses, and UPDATE: the seduction of lumity towards camila

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        3. Enenhra Thu 03 Aug 2023 07:14PM UTC

          kisses after the chain and the other almost at the end

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        4. Enenhra Thu 03 Aug 2023 11:30PM UTC

          In case you want to know, I didn't do the update yesterday because I didn't like having taken so long to divide it (and it's my fault, not yours obviously) because I had 80% to finish it as quickly as possible and give you all the fic

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          1. CHACA CHACA (Guest) Fri 04 Aug 2023 12:01AM UTC

            Don't worry friend I even want to apologize because I think it was rude of me to try to get you to post that day

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