E&BE Lesson 4
E&BE Lesson 4
E&BE Lesson 4
Week 9, lesson 4
peer feedback individual essay critical review stress and intonation
Individual essay
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Peer review student C & Ds essay teacher consultation about individual essay
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Peer review Peer review student Ds essay student C & Ds essay teacher consultation about individual essay teacher consultation about individual essay
specific feedback and help in areas that you were struggling with reflection on personal feedback discussion peer feedback process
Writing/rewriting paragraphs
How did that go? Are you happy with your adjusted introductory paragraph? Did you manage to write a good new paragraph?
Revising paragraphs
Wadsworth Handbook chapter 7
Classification paragraph
A first date can end up being categorized as successful, a clingy, a boastful or awkward. Successful first dates include both parties expressing information about what they like, who they are, and so forth. Usually, these dates will end in tentative plans for a second one. Clingy dates end up with one of the parties practically begging for information about the other. However, the non-clinger is not interested. On boastful dates, one member of the duo talks about all of his or her skills, talents, and abilities. The listening end of the pair is never asked about his or her life. Awkward first dates generally involve lots of silence or one or both of the partners not knowing how to act appropriately. While many dates occur every day, they can generally fall into one of these categories.
Exemplification paragraph
Achoura is one of the most important celebrations in which Muslims do various activities. It is celebrated on Muharram 10th every year. On this occasion, families meet together for a special meal of dried fruit and couscous with guedid. They also eat cakes and drink milk or juice. More importantly, they offer Zakat to poor people. Moreover, families and friends meet each other on the big day to play their drums while singing and dancing. In addition, Achoura is an opportunity for children to play with toys that their parents bought for them, such as dolls, plastic guns, cars and masks. Furthermore, children spray each other with water on the day of Zem Zem. In the evening they light bonfires as well as fireworks and start singing and dancing around the fire late into the night. In brief, Achoura is a mixture of religious, cultural and traditional practices.
Transitional paragrah
For most people, the word cloning is not only associated with Dolly the sheep but also fears about cloning human beings. This confusion makes it hard for people to understand the difference between therapeutic cloning and making a cloned baby. On the other hand, a more precise term, such as "nuclear transplantation," which describes the technique used to make copies of stem cells, doesn't advance the debate either because most people don't understand what it means. What the public really needs to understand is that there is scientific technique now that can be used in several ways, and one way of using it is to find new medical therapies.
Cause-and-effect paragraph
In recent decades, cities have grown so large that now about 50% of the Earth's population lives in urban areas. There are several reasons for this occurrence. First, the increasing industrialization of the nineteenth century resulted in the creation of many factory jobs, which tended to be located in cities. These jobs, with their promise of a better material life, attracted many people from rural areas. Second, there were many schools established to educate the children of the new factory laborers. The promise of a better education persuaded many families to leave farming communities and move to the cities. Finally, as the cities grew, people established places of leisure, entertainment, and culture, such as sports stadiums, theaters, and museums. For many people, these facilities made city life appear more interesting than life on the farm, and therefore drew them away from rural communities.
Definition paragraph
The IAU has so far recognized five dwarf planets differentiated from planets by a parameter of planetary discriminant which allows estimating the capacity to dominate orbits. According to NationMaster Encyclopaedia dwarf planets follow orbits which are not free from other minor celestial bodies. Simultaneously, they always circulate the Sun and not other celestial objects (they are not satellites). Several dwarf planets have already been scrutinized effectively. Their physical properties have been calculated through routine Earthbased observations as well as advanced image-searching software. Since current data may not be entirely accurate, further examinations are undertaken by astronomers and physicists world-wide.
Paragraphs check
Does the introductory paragraph make you want to read further? Is the information in the body of the essay well-structured into paragraphs? Does the concluding paragraph review the main point? Does the concluding paragraph contain a statement that you will remember?
Dont announce your topic (In my paper, this essay is about) Dont undercut your credibility (I am not an expert on ) Dont mention the difficulty of the subject Dont simply repeat your introduction in other words in the conclusion Dont introduce new point in your introduction
Donts
Structure of an outline
I. MAJOR SUBTOPIC A. Minor Subtopic 1. Major Detail (a) Minor Detail (b) Minor Detail 2. Major Detail B. Minor Subtopic II. MAJOR SUBTOPIC
Example of an outline
I T/V pronoun system A reciprocally 1 intimacy and solidarity 2 mutual respect B non-reciprocally 1 power II social and political influences A social change 1 aristocratic use 2 social mobility B familiar versus polite 1 egalitarianism 2 power and status C Swedish paradox 1 older people 2 customers D German dilemma 1 West 2 East IV synthetic personalisation A custom care B relationships 1 superiority / inferiority 2 fake intimacy
Question1 Spelling Spell the word .................. without any spelling mistakes. Question 2 abbreviation What does the abbreviation UFO stand for? Question 3 General knowledge Nine films were nominated for best film 2013. Name at least four. Question 4 Economy Which country lost its triple A status last weekend? Question 5 Picture What is this?
Quiz 4
Sublist 3
Exercise 1 Alternative considerable fund documents minor tasks cores scheme proportion interact Exercise 2 Published circumstances sequence technical illustrating dominated justify constant negated corporate Exercise 3 Constrained immigrated react outcome sex comments technique correspond layer emphasis Exercise 4 Compensate register link ensure shifted partner technology contributes imply criteria Exercise 5 Locate initial philosophy convened specify valid rely deduce component exclude