Diapositivas Sobre Persuasión
Diapositivas Sobre Persuasión
Diapositivas Sobre Persuasión
Persuadir y convencer
FACTS are just FACTS. STORIES change our THINKING and our FRAMEWORK
Para qu razonamos?
Razonamos para convencer en la
comunicacin
Se explican as los sesgos
http://derechomercantilespana.blogspot.com.
es/2013/08/para-que-razonamos.html
Los hechos
1. What facts are you trying to emphasize? Emphasize those facts which advance your argument
2. What facts are you trying to downplay?
3. What emotions are you trying to elicit in the reader?
4. Avoid trivial, unrealistic and unbelievable claims.
5. Select an organizational form which best compliments your argument on appeal.
6. Once you have chosen a perspective from which to tell your story, try not to flip back and forth
7. Use graphic language to support your case.
8. Use dull, conclusory language when describing facts you want to minimize
9. Evita los detalles irrelevantes, especialmente, fechas (molestan mucho: establish the
chronology of events without using dates)
10. Use facts to create the mood in which your brief will be read (el crtel que nunca existi).
11.When you discuss legal principles, be sure that you quickly follow up by explaining what about
the facts of your case makes those principles relevant.
12. Do not just cite case law for general legal principles. Find, cite and discuss precedents which
are factually analogous to your case.
In most cases, there is little debate over the law. The real issue is
whether the facts of your case fit within the relevant legal boundaries.
Reader-friendly writing:
Legibility (easy reading) is fundamental to readability (easy
understanding).
dont rely entirely on standard prosey block paragraphs. Look for alternative methods of
formatting (e.g., bullets) that make it visually easier for the reader;
use sensible paragraphing and numbering. Dont go further than a third level of breakdown
(e.g., 1(a)(i)). If you feel the need to go beyond that then chances are youve overused
headings (you arent drafting legislation after all).
Avoid roman numerals they look too much like a foreign language;
if the items listed have no rank ordering, then bullets are preferable to numbered lists;
never use a font smaller than 10 or larger than 12 for the main body of the text;
avoid lines that are entirely capitalized their uniform size makes them difficult to read;
avoid underlining its a throwback to the days of typewriters. Use italics or boldface to add
emphasis;
there is evidence that justified right margins make text harder to read, so it may be best to
use ragged right margins for factums;
align headings to the left in a larger, bolded font. Use a smaller bolded font for subheadings;
readers like white space, and makes the rest more easily absorbed
Pictures, charts, diagrams, parallelisms can really help
No queremos que el Juez aprenda, por tanto, hay que maximizar la legibilidad
Cmo escribir
Reading is not a duty, and has
consequently no business to be made disagreeable.
Los eventos consuetudinarios que acontecen en la rua vs. Lo que pasa en la calle
El cansancio de los jueces y la libertad provisional (alargarse)
Legalese, abreviaturas y definiciones y referencias internas estn bien para los
contratos (y no siempre), no para los escritos procesales (los jueces son capaces
de distinguir legalese de plain english y consideran ms convincente los 2)
Conecta las partes del escrito entre s
No repitas, pero tampoco escondas los argumentos
Haz el escrito autosuficiente (no fuentes externas)
avoid false intensifiers
Cuenta una historia pero dont write it like a mystery novel
Si generas en el Juez una pregunta, contstala inmediatamente
No-one has ever been convinced by an argument they didnt understand
If youre passionate about what you write, about what you say, other people will
be too
make your section headings and subheadings full, informative sentences.
kozinsky
I can understand why lawyers may resist simple
writing: It' s much harder to do than
convoluted, abstract writing. Often, the
attempt to simplify and clarify reveals
weaknesses in your own argument,
weaknesses that have to be addressed and
shored up. Simple, direct language is more
persuasive is more easily grasped. Abstract
language has a tendency to be soft and
ambiguous
The case was a civil dispute about the cause of a fire, and concerned an appeal against a decision in the High Court by Judge
Edwards-Stuart. Edwards-Stuart had essentially concluded that the fire had been started by a discarded cigarette, even
though this seemed an unlikely event in itself, because the other two explanations were even more implausible. The Court
of Appeal rejected this approach although still supported the overall judgement and disallowed the appeal - commentaries
on this case have appeared here and here.
Sometimes the "balance of probability" standard is expressed mathematically as "50 + % probability", but this can
carry with it a danger of pseudo-mathematics, as the argument in this case demonstrated. When judging whether a
case for believing that an event was caused in a particular way is stronger that the case for not so believing, the
process is not scientific (although it may obviously include evaluation of scientific evidence) and to express the
probability of some event having happened in percentage terms is illusory.
The idea that you can assign probabilities to events that have already occurred, but where we are ignorant of the result,
forms the basis for the Bayesian view of probability. Put very broadly, the 'classical' view of probability is in terms of genuine
unpredictability about future events, popularly known as 'chance' or 'aleatory uncertainty'. The Bayesian interpretation
allows probability also to be used to express our uncertainty due to our ignorance, known as 'epistemic uncertainty', and
popularly expressed as betting odds.).
The judges went on to say:
The chances of something happening in the future may be expressed in terms of percentage. Epidemiological evidence
may enable doctors to say that on average smokers increase their risk of lung cancer by X%. But you cannot properly
say that there is a 25 per cent chance that something has happened: Hotson v East Berkshire Health Authority [1987]
AC 750. Either it has or it has not.
http://understandinguncertainty.org/court-appeal-bans-bayesian-probability-and-sherlock-holmes
http://www.evanschaeffer.com/five-stepstowards-persuasive-writing.html
PERSUASIVE LEGAL WRITING By Daniel U.
Smith
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