Technical Element S
Technical Element S
Technical Element S
a. Punctuations
Punctuations are marks used to clarify the structure and meaning of sentences.
They promote ease of reading and help avoid ambiguities; hence, they contribute
to the writer’s style. While being a somewhat mechanical phrase of writing, the
proper use of punctuations cannot be neglected because it has direct spread
bearing upon the success or failure in communicating ideas. Without
punctuations, written language cannot be indicating certain definite and clear
qualities of speech, like asking a question or making an interjection.
The English punctuations used in the 17 th century had evolved from earlier
system systems of dots, lines, and slash marks used by the Greeks and Romans.
The punctuation marks of the Greeks and Romans were not intended to affect
meaning and were not based on grammar. They were used to divide segments of
discourse to indicate where to pause and breathe when reading the text aloud.
Hence, they served rhetorical and elocutionary functions.
By the end of the 17th century, the present syntactic system of punctuations was
born. Punctuation marks became guides to grammatical construction and reflect
the pattern and rhythm of speech.
The needs of the eye are different from those of the ear. A speaker can change his
tone and raise his voice for the benefit of is listeners. He can shake his head,
points his forefinger and bang the table to attract the attention of his audience.
Punctuations are of help not only to the reader but also to the speaker. The
comma signals a long pause, the semicolon, a short pause and the period, a
complete stop. The overuse of punctuations is as much an error as their
underuse. The test for the proper use of punctuations is whether it helps to make
the meaning of the sentence clear and to prevent its misreading.
Edgar Allan Poe said that, “a sentence may be deprived of half of its force by the
use of wrong punctuations.
The punctuations are the following such as: (i) ampersand, (ii) apostrophe,
(iii) braces, (iv) brackets, (v) colon, (vi) comma, (vii) dash, (viii) ellipsis
point, (ix) exclamation point, (x) hyphen, (xi) parenthesis, (xii) period,
(xiii) question mark, (xiv) quotation mark, (xv) semicolon, and (16) slash.
The slash is also called a bar, diagonal, oblique, slant, slant line, solidus
virgule.
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All punctuations serve on of the four general purposes: to terminate, to
introduce, to separate, and to enclose.
Five punctuations are used to separate parts of a sentence. These are the
comma, semicolon, dash, hyphen or apostrophe. Seven marks of
punctuation are used to enclose parts of a sentence. These are the comma,
dash, quotation mark, single quotation mark, parentheses and bracket.
b. Ampersand
An ampersand is the name of the symbol “&,” meaning “and.” It is also spelled
“amperzand” and called “the short and.” It is a corruption of “and per se and.” It
should not be used in formal writing, unless it is part of a name, address or the
title of a document.
1. Uses of Ampersand
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Do not use a comma before an ampersand. When an ampersand us used
between the last two elements in a series, the comma is omitted (e.g., The
law firm of Quiason, Makalintal, Barot, Torres, Ibarra & Associates).
c. Apostrophe
1. Uses of Apostrophe
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3. Plural nouns ending in “s” (e.g., Hills’, Horses’,
Girls’, Justices’). If an apostrophe and an “s” are
added, the resulting word would be hard to
pronounce.
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placing of the apostrophe or apostrophe and “s” after
the second word is the preferred form (e.g.,
Someone’s else bed or Someone else’s bed). In this
example, the first is unusual and it sounds awkward to
the ears; the second is the usual contraction of the
possessive.
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iv. To Devise Words. – Use the apostrophe to devise or invent
words from certain abbreviations, particularly those used in
informal writing (e.g., Ass’n – Association, Sec’y – Secretary, O.k.’d
– okayed).
viii. To Show the Source. – Use the apostrophe to show the source
or origin of things (e.g., Jose’s appeal brief)
iii. To show the possession of things (e.g., the legs of the table, not
the table’s legs).
d. Bracket
Bracket is a mark, squarish in form and always used in pairs, for setting of
inserted materials remotely or incidentally related to the texts. The enclosed
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editorials, comments, clarifications, explanations, and interpretations within the
texts are written by persons other than the one placing the bracketed materials.
The inserted materials, whether quoted or paraphrased, have the effect of altering
the original texts (e.g., They have him [Pedro] at their mercy).
1. Uses of Bracket
i. To Enclose
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k. Insertions that supply missing letters or words (e.g., “The
law was en[ac]ted last year.”).
DO not use a bracket to set off criticism or other views of the quoted
materials. Transfer such commentary to separate sentences.
Example:
e. Colon
The colon is a sign of a pause, midway in length between the semicolon and the
period. It indicates the strongest possible break within a sentence. It explains,
balances or completes in some way the preceding statement. It signals to the
reader that more information is to come on the subject of concern; hence, it is a
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mark of introduction. It can also be used to create a slight dramatic tension, akin
to the blare of trumpets.
“The colon is a stop and a curtain-raiser. It points toward something that follows.
It says: There is something missing in this sentence and here it comes.”
1. Uses of Colon
Example:
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vii. A brief heading, which may be a word, phrase or clause
that emphasizes, illustrates, restates or exemplifies what has
already been stated. since the colon is not an end mark, do
naot capitalize the word after it unless it is a proper noun.
(e.g., He has only one regret: he didn’t top the Board
Examinations.)
Example:
Pedro: No.
What follows a colon is linked with some element that precedes it,
whether as an example, illustration, explanation, an elaboration or
the message after a salutation (e.g., Dear Sir/Madam:).
ii. The hour and minute in noting the time marked by clocks
and watches (e.g., 10:10 a.m.).
v. The title from the sub title and the subject of a book (e.g.,
The Wide World: A High School Geography.).
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ix. Writers and typist in the identification lines of business
letter (e.g., EGM: rrt).
Example:
Example:
Example:
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In a By-line.
Example:
Wrong: By: F.S. Jose (the colon here is not necessary just
better write By F.S. Jose.).
A colon is not used after the salutation in an informal letter. Instead the
comma is used (e.g., Dear Aira,). A colon is placed outside a closing
quotation mark or parenthesis.
f. Comma
The comma is the most frequent used punctuation mark in English. It is used to
separate items in a series, to set off grammatical elements within sentences, and
to coordinate one part of a sentence with another. It acts as a barrier to keep
certain sentence elements from “flowing” or “running” in to each other. It is,
however, a relatively weak mark as compared with the period and the semicolon.
It indicates the smallest interruption in continuity of thought in a sentence. Like
the colon and the semicolon, the comma is a punctuation inside a sentence.
The misuse and the overuse of commas are as bad as their omission in cases
where they are needed. The use, misuse or non-use of commas can make a lot of
difference in the sense or meaning of a sentence. The sentence “Old men and
women should be treated with courtesy” means that old men and women should
be given due respect. But if add comma after “men,” the sense changes and the
sentence will mean that while all women regardless of age should be treated with
courtesy, only “old men” should be so treated.
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Aside from the mandatory rules on the use of commas, their use is mainly a
matter of good judgment, with ease of reading as the end in view. Use them only
when they add to clarity and understanding, and avoid them when they interrupt
or slow down thoughts.
1. Kinds of Commas
Commas may be classified into the single and the paired commas. The
function of the single comma is mainly separation, i.e., the single comma
indicates that the element it separates from the others is individual, one by
itself, and not to be mixed with the elements before or after it. The paired
commas mark the beginning and the end of a word, phrases, or clause,
which is an additional element to the information given in the rest of a
sentence. An expression separated by paired commas may be omitted
without impairing the meaning intended by the sentence.
Commas are also classified into essential or optional commas. The use of
commas that are essential is mandatory. Optional commas are used for
emphasis or clarity at the discretion of the writer.
Example 1:
He buys his pen, pencil, ruler, and paper from Joe’s store.
Note: It is essential to set off with commas the vocatives inside a sentence.
Example 2:
Example 3:
2. Uses of Comma
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A comma may be used to: (i) introduce, (ii) separate, (iii) enclose, (iv)
indicate omission, (v) add information, (vi) contradict or contrast, and
(vii) divide. A comma also has miscellaneous uses.
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7. A verbal phrase that introduces the main clause.
(e.g., To get an answer, send a follow-up telegram.)
b. Adjectives.
Examples:
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used to separate them. (e.g., Our watchman is a good
old man).
Example:
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restricted function. A restrictive appositive is not separated
by a comma. (e.g., My friend Peter is on vacation.)
e. Clauses.
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subordinate clause is not an essential part of the
message; otherwise, no comma is used.
Example:
ii. One day you are rich, the next day you are
impoverished.
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before a dependent or subordinate clause that follows
the main clause; if the independent or subordinate is
part of the message, no comma is used. (e.g., When
you are finished with Lesson3, go to Lesson4.)
k. Elements.
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l. Explanations. – (e.g., I would like to undertake a project,
i.e., one that would help the poor to earn additional income.)
Example:
iv. The name of a person form his title (e.g., Juan Dela
Cruz, M.D.); and
s. Phrase
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Example:
v. Unrelated figures.
Example:
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first two elements. The final comma in a series is called the
serial comma. The Oxford University Press placed a comma
before “and” in a list of words.
Example:
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nouns referring to other nouns. (e.g., Peter Dexter, an
Australian lawyer, will attend the meeting.).
Note: If the apposition is part of the proper noun, the comma can
be omitted (e.g., the river Pasig).
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materially affecting the meaning of the sentence. (e.g., His
answer, to say the least, is idiotic.)
i. for example;
ii. in fact; and
iii. I think.
q. Phrases.
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vi. “Said” phrases inserted in the middle of a sentence
to divide a quotation. (e.g., It is up to you, he said, you
need to decide.)
Example:
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vii. Miscellaneous uses of a Comma. – Commas are used:
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8. A short antithetical phrase. (e.g., The more the better.)
Since many writers use “which” for both limiting and non-
limiting clauses, a comma must be used to signify a non-
limiting function. The absence of a comma signifies that the
clause is limiting.
1. The word “page” and the numbers following it. (e.g., page
100)
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2. A word or phrase in italics. (e.g., The case was Chi Ming
Choi v. Court of Appeal.)
Example:
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3. Adverb form the adjectives or adverbs they modify. (e.g., It
was a truly great performance.)
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more than five words. (e.g., The grass grew and the flowers
bloomed.)
19. Antithetical phrases that are short. (e.g., The sooner the
better.)
22. The postal number of the house and the street name in
an address. (e.g., 24 Nightingale, Greenmeadows.)
26. The prepositions and the year (e.g., in 2019) and the
preposition, month and the year (e.g., in December 2019).
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27. A quotation used as the subject, the predicate nominative
of the sentence, or the integral part of the sentence. (e.g.,
“Over my dead body” was the reply.)
Commas are used to separate main clauses that are not joined by
coordinating conjunctions and which are short and obviously parallel.
(e.g., Bombs have destroyed most of the buildings, disease has ravaged the
population.)
When the said clauses are not short or parallel, it is an error to use a
comma to connect them. The use of a comma to separate long and non-
parallel clauses is called a comma is called a comma-splice error or comma
fault. These clauses should be separated by a period or linked by a
semicolon, colon or by conjunction and a comma. In a comma-splice error,
the reader cannot determine where one sentence ends and the next one
begins. (e.g., A meeting of the counsel is scheduled tomorrow, many
important items are on the agenda.)
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In rare cases and when deftly handled, a comma splice can be used and is
acceptable.
Example:
g. Dash
The dash (-) is an emphatic mark of punctuation and is used to indicate a sudden
shift I through or a sharp break in the construction of the sentence. It is a
vigorous mark with strong emotional tone. It sets off parenthetical elements in a
sentence that are less logically related to the rest of the sentence. The
parenthetical elements are more or less equivalent but have no words to link or
join them. It may indicate the addition of information.
1. Uses of dash
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ix. To note authors. – A dash is used to note the author of the
quotation that is not mentioned in the text. (e.g., “I fear not the man
who practiced 10, ooo kicks once, but I fear the man who practiced
one kick 10, 000 times.” – Bruce Lee)
2. Kinds of dashes
The dash exists in different lengths. The most common dash is the “em
dash,” which in typeset has the width of capital M. the “en dash” is shorter
than the “em dash” but longer than the hyphen. The en dash is used:
iii. As replacement for the word “to” between capital names; and
A three – em dash indicates that a word has been left out or that an
unknown word or figure is to be supplied.
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While the colon gives warning and leads into something, the dash cuts off
the message without warning in order to make the words that come after
it, conspicuous. A dash and a colon cannot be used together. Where a dash
would come at a point in a sentence where a colon should also appear, the
colon is the one retained.
Who is the tall girl at the front desk – the one in the pink dress?
When exclamation points and question marks and question marks appears
in materials set off by a pair of dashes, the exclamation points or question
marks are replaced inside the second dash. A dash is placed inside
quotation marks when it punctuates the quoted matter only. It is placed
outside the quotation marks when it punctuates the whole sentence.
A dash can perform functions equivalent to those of the comma and the
terminal marks like (period, exclamation point, question mark). While it
can lend sometimes an air of surprise, it is a useful device for adding a
sense of movement to the writing.
h. Exclamation Point
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ii. To emphasize. – The exclamation point may be enclosed in
parentheses and place immediately after the word or words one
wants to emphasize.
b. Incredibility.
Never use an exclamation point when another mark will serve adequately
and properly. Except when an exclamation point appears in a quoted
material, it should not be used in legal writing. If there is a need to
emphasize a point, select emphatic words.
Example:
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If the exclamation point is part of a title, as of a move, it may be followed
by a comma. When the exclamation mark punctuates materials enclosed
within brackets, dashes, parentheses and quotation marks and included as
part of the sentence, it should be placed within said enclosures. It should
be placed outside said enclosures when it punctuates the entire sentence.
The exclamation point in quoted passages falls inside the quotation marks.
(e.g., “That is a lie!” shouted the accused)
i. Ellipses
Ellipses are used to indicate an intentional omission from a quoted word, phrase,
clause, paragraph, or passage. They consist of three points or dots, and each point
is actually a period. They are placed on the line exactly where periods are placed.
They are also called “suspension points,” “ellipses periods,” and “ellipses mark.”
Some grammarians classify ellipses as peiods.
1. Uses of Ellipses
a. An interruption.
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Ellipses should not be used:
If a fully quoted sentence is followed by ellipses mark, four points are also
used. The first point is the period for the preceding sentence and the
remaining three points are the usual ellipses.
If one or more paragraphs are omitted, use four points and begin the next
paragraph (which is indented) on the next line. If the quoted matter does
not begin a paragraph in the original source, the quotation is not indented
in a new paragraph and no ellipses marks are used.
If the sentence quoted ends with the quotation or exclamation mark, use
that mark rather than the period after the ellipses.
j. Hyphen
i. To Avoid
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a. Ambiguities by separating certain words. A hyphen is used
when the resulting word might be confused with a similar
word of different meaning.
Example:
ii. To combine
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2. half (e.g., half-eaten food), and
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Most words with the prefix “co” and “pro” have
dropped the hyphen (e.g., cooperative; cooperate).
iii. To divide
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numerals, including those used with names should not be
split (e.g., Henry VI, Elizabeth I).
v. To indicate:
vi. To make:
vii. To separate:
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f. Numbers of buildings (e.g, Building 1 – A).
ix. To take the place of the phrase “up to and including” between
numbers and dates (e.g., 1941 – 1945; Room Nos. 101 – 105).
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Hyphens are not used:
There are exceptions to this rule. The prefix “anti” is separated from
the main word if said word begins with a letter “i” or a capital letter.
There are some words where the said prefix is separated from the
main word by a hyphen (e.g., anti-aircraft; anti-hero; anti-
personnel);
iii. To separate words that can be written better as one word (e.g.,
waterfowl, not water-fowl).
d. When the last letter of the prefix is the same as the first
letter of the word;
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b. When the follow the noun they modify and are not unit
modifiers (e.g., He is ill prepared).
xv. To combine two short nouns which are of common use and with
nearly equal stress on both nouns (e.g., fuel oil, duffle bag); and
In law, most rules have exceptions and there are even cases when there are
exceptions to the exceptions which do not fall under the general rule. The
same is true in the case of the use of the hyphen.
However, there are cases when two different rules are in force with respect
to the use of hyphen. This situation is due to the fact that the rules of
grammar are not made by legislative bodies. Hence, there are no fixed
rules in the following cases:
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ii. Compounds consisting of a noun and a preposition phrase (e.g.,
lily of the valley; jack of all trades);
viii. Short words with one syllable and in which both elements may
have primary stress, are either spelled solid or hyphenated (e.g.,
topsy-turvy; crisis-cross). Some compounds that are written solid
may be written open, or hyphenated to avoid ambiguity to ensure
comprehension or to make the pronunciation clearer (e.g., tri-city;
un-iced; bi-level).
k. Parentheses
1. Uses of Parentheses
Parentheses are curved punctuation marks used like commas and dashes,
to enclose new materials inside a sentence. But unlike commas, the
material enclosed in parentheses have little connection with the context of
the sentence. Unlike dashes, parentheses are used to de-emphasize the
importance of the enclosed matter. Parentheses are actually interruptions
and tend to slow up communication from writer to reader. Often the
materials enclosed in parentheses have no grammatical relationship to the
sentence in which they appear. The marks are sometimes called “curved of
parentheses.”
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The word “parentheses” came from the Latin word “para,” which means
“beside” and “entithenai,” meaning “to insert.” The singular form of the
word is “parenthesis.”
Parentheses consist of the “opening mark,” the one before, and the
“closing mark,” the one after the enclosed matter. A word, phrase, clause
or sentence enclosed in parentheses, out it, is called a parenthetical
statement.
2. Uses of parentheses
c. Cross-references;
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Example:
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i. If a full sentence is not contained within another sentence, the
punctuation of the full sentence should be before the closing
parenthesis. The preceding sentence has its own end mark;
Example:
iv. Place the question mark and exclamation point inside the
parenthetical material if it is a question or exclamation; otherwise,
the question mark and exclamation point should be placed outside
the closing parenthesis. (e.g., No one was prepared (why should
they have been?) for the attack);
vi. Do not use any mark of punctuation before the opening mark;
vii. Place after the closing mark any regular sentence punctuation.
(If you call me next Monday (Tel. No. 631-1010), we will have the
information for you;
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x. Periods come outside a parenthetical expression when a full
sentence is not set off parenthetically;
xii. Commas, semicolons and periods are place outside the closing
mark. (e.g., Open the package carefully (do not puncture the
carton); and
xiii. Place the question mark and exclamation point inside the
parenthetical materials if the latter is itself a question or
exclamation, otherwise place both the parentheses outside. (e.g., No
one prepared (Why should they have been?) for the attack).
l. Period
Next to the comma, the period is the most used mark of punctuation. It is one of
the three end marks of full stops, the others being the question mark and the
exclamation point. It ends all sentences that are not questions or exclamations. It
says, “This is the end of the sentence.” It is also placed at the end of a group of
words used a sentence, even though they not continue a complete sentence.
1. Uses of period
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a. Abbreviations (e.g., Mister – Mr.; barrel – bbl.; feet – ft.);
Example:
b. Complete sentence;
ii. To Guide. – Periods are used to guide the reader’s eye across to a
page of reference in tables of contents of books. For this purpose, a
line of periods called “leaders” is used.
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a. Parts of abbreviations (e.g., B.C. – before Christ; A.M. –
ante-meridian; P.M. – post-meridian);
Example:
v. After items in a tabulated list if one or more of the items are not
complete sentences;
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Example:
1. The introduction
2. When to use a period
3. When not to use a period
ix. After Roman numerals when with names (e.g., Elizabeth II);
xii. After sentences that are included within another sentences and
enclosed in parentheses. (e.g., The snow (I caught a glimpse of it as
I passed the window) was falling heavily);
xiii. After familiar shortened forms of words (e.g., auto, cab, taxi);
and
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iii. The periods are placed outside the parentheses or brackets when
the enclosed matter forms part of the preceding statement. (e.g.,
Orders were placed for F-14 aircraft (then still in development);
m. Question Mark
Example:
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Note: Sometimes a sentence begins as a statement and ends as a
question.
Example:
ii. A single question mark comes inside quotation marks when both
the non-quoted and quoted elements are questions; and
n. Quotation Mark
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said or written.” Quotation marks, whether double or single, always come in
pairs.
Other writers omit the quotation marks and just separate the
short sentence with a comma.
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g. Words of marked informality or which are considered odd
or unusual, like a jargon used in formal writing. (e.g., I
thought she was a “knockout.”);
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a. The words of a speaker from the rest of the sentence. (e.g.,
“The flight is scheduled for Tuesday,” said the pilot.); and
v. Quotation marks are not used with long passages and epigraphs.
Instead, the material is single spaced and indented as separate
paragraphs, called extracts or block paragraphs. Sometimes the
paragraphs are printed in a smaller type;
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vii. In informal writing, unlike in informal writing, words which are
referred to as words, are not enclosed in quotation marks. The
words are put in italics or more underlined; and
viii. Do not enclose with quotation marks the words “yes” and “no,”
except in direct discourses.
The period and the comma always go inside the quotation, whether they
are part of the quoted material or not. Where the end of a quotation is also
the end of the sentence, the period falls inside the quotation, whether it is
a part of the quote or not. (e.g., Pedro said, “You will be sorry if you don’t
go.”).
Question marks and exclamation points are placed inside the final
quotation mark if they are part of the quoted material; otherwise, they are
placed outside the quotation marks. So if the entire sentence is a question,
the question mark falls outside the quotation mark. (What is the meaning
of “nullum crimes nulla poena sine lege?”).
Colons and semicolons are always placed outside the quotation marks.
Example:
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The question mark at the close of the entire sentence that is quoted falls
inside the quotation mark. Use only one mark of punctuation at the end of
a sentence ending with a quotation.
Never use two forms of punctuation at the end of a quotation. When the
entire sentence is a question but the quoted portion is not, place the
question mark after the closing quotation. (Did the fiscal say “meet at the
office?”).
Example:
In the case of lengthy quotes, the quotation marks may be omitted if the
lines of the quotation are made shorter than full measure that is, by
indenting the lines. In that way the quoted material is clearly distinguished
from the reminder of the text.
When writing dialogues, begin a new paragraph each time the speaker
changes.
o. Semicolon
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discernible relationship between the sentence elements. It performs a certain
degree of both separation and unification.
1. Uses of semicolon
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i. Where the relationship between the two independent clauses is
not strong enough to warrant making only one sentence out of
them;
iv. Between clauses ore phrases or words which are not coordinate
in rank.
p. Slash
1. Uses of slash
A slash is used:
ii. To replace the words “per” (e.g., 100 Km/Hr), “divided by” (e.g.,
price/earnings ratio) and “to” (e.g., Manila/Baguio). In the phrase
“price/earning ratio,” the slash can be replaced by a hyphen (e.g.,
price-earning ratio);
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vii. To indicate line breaks in poetry. The slash is used in this case to
divide lines of poetry when written in continuous text and not in
indented verse forms. If more than one line of poetry is run into the
text, the end of the line is marked by a slash. The slash may be
omitted where each line begins with a capital;
q. Miscellaneous Marks
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means “to begin again.” An acute sign appears above or below the
letters to indicate their pronunciation or other functions within a
word. When a word with more than one syllable is pronounced, one
of the syllables is emphasized more strongly than the other or
others. The same word may be accented differently as its sense
changes. The word “object” as a noun is accented on the first
syllable when as a verb it is accented on the second syllable. Some
foreign words that have been absorbed into English and which carry
the acute accent are: attaché, blasé, cliché, communiqué, coup dé
tat, début, decór, éclair, élan, exposé, fianceé, passé, and touché.
ii. Cedilla. – This is a hook-like mark placed under the letter “ç” in
some borrowed words to show that it is sounded like a voiceless “s.”
The cedilla is placed in the following words: apercu, façade,
garcon, Provençal.
v. Grave accent. – This is used to indicate the quality of the open “e”
as in “chere” or “dear.” Some writers use the grave accent to
indicate that full pronunciation is to be given to a syllable at the end
of a word, as in “love,” which is to be pronounced as “love-ed.” The
grave accent appears in the following words: á la carte, á la mode,
pére, piéce de reśistance, piéd a terre.
2. Asterisk
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The asterisk, a star-shaped mark (*), is used to indicate omission or to call
attention to something requiring a comment in the footnote. In the first
case, three spaced asterisk are placed between the paragraphs. In the
second case, the asterisk may refer to either an explanatory or reference
footnote. As a reference mark, the asterisk has been replaced by the use of
number after the sentence.
3. Caret
4. Interbank
Example:
Camarines Norte }
Camarines Sur }
Albay } Bicol Provinces
Sorsogon }
Catanduanes }
ii. Breve. – It is a mark (˘) over a letter to show that said letter is
pronounced with a short sound or to indicate a specific
pronunciation.
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The ditto marks are not used in formal writing. They are a time and
effort-saving mechanical device employed frequently in tables of
names, bills, accounts and lists.
Mechanics of Writing
Punctuation and Mechanics are concerned with where to locate conventions governing
the use of a particular graphic device, and which make a language work.
However, punctuations are correlated with the intonation patterns of the spoken
language, like indicating the change in the tone of the voice when asking a question or
whether a pause is long (period) or short (comma). The devices used without correlation
with the intonation of speaking are grouped under the heading “mechanics.” A word
that is capitalized is pronounced the same way as when it is printed with an initial lower
case letter.
Mechanics is the technical part of writing. It is related to punctuation and applies to the
correct use of capitals, abbreviations, italics, and other devices which make written
communication more easily understood.
The mechanics commonly used are: the italics, underlining, capitalization, numbers,
spacing lists, ellipsis points, typographical correction.
Leave enough space after punctuation marks: after a comma and semicolon, one space;
after a colon, period, question marks, and quoted material, two spaces.
When writing title or titles of a manuscript, write the title in solid capitals and begin the
body of the manuscript at least three spaces below the title.
The left hand margin should be at least one inch and the right hand margin at least one-
half inch. The bottom margin after page one shall be at least one inch. Mechanics are
needed in writing neat and legible manuscript.
In typewritten manuscripts, there should be margins at the top, the bottom, and both
sides of each page. The left margin should be slightly wider. As much as possible, avoid
hyphens – on the right margin. This can be done by spacing the words in the sentence so
that one need not split the ending word.
All typed-copy should be prepared with a double space between lines and the five –
letter space between the paragraphs. The mechanics of the language are the various
principles and conventions that make it work.
a. Abbreviations
Abbreviations are words shortened by lapping of their ends. They help save time
and space. Spelling out items like “Mister Cruz” and “Mistress Santos” would be
both distracting both irksome. Likewise, the use of abbreviations avoids the
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needless repetition of the words and phrases. However, there should be a
minimum use of abbreviations. In formal writing use only the commonly
accepted abbreviations. Spell out words not commonly abbreviated and readily
understood in abbreviated form; otherwise, only confusion would ensue.
There are three special forms of abbreviations are contractions, acronyms, and
suspensions. Contractions refer to words written with an apostrophe to show the
omission of a letter or numerical (don’t – do not, class of ’23 – class of 2023).
Acronyms are words coined from the initial letters or syllables of successive parts
of a term (radar – radio detecting and ranging; UNESCO – Nations Educational,
Scientific and Cultural Organization). In suspension, the letters between the first
and last letters are omitted (Mr. – Mister).
viii. The word “Junior” and “Senior” after a name (eg., Nestor
Abugan, Jr., Pedro Cruz, Sr.);
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Note: The words “longitude” and “latitude” are abbreviated in tabular
data but written out in running texts.
xi. Names
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h. Geographical Names (e.g,. Mt. Everest – Mount Everest;
Mt. Apo – Mount Apo; Ft/Frt. Bonifacio, Santiago, Del
Pilar).
Note: A.D., is the abbreviations for Anno Domini (in the year
of our Lord, not after death), is written before the year (A.D.
11), unlike B.C. (before Christ) which is written after the date
(5 B.C.).
Example:
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c. Do not abbreviate when in doubt;
ii. The words “Fort,” “Mount,” “Point,” and “Port” when used
as part of the names of places;
- 50 kilos
- 100 yards
- 41 square meters
vii. The names of days of the week and months of the year;
ix. The titles before names, whether full or last names only,
like Professor, Reverend, Superintendent, etc.
3. Rules of abbreviation
In general, the following are the basic rules of abbreviation, such as:
Example:
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c. Books of the Bible – The name of the Books of the Bible when
used in reference to chapters and verses are abbreviated (e.g,. Gen.
1:1).
ii. When they represent the initial letters of words that are
normally lower cased (e.g,. CATV – Community Antennae
Television, FY – Fiscal Year). Exceptions to this rules are
“a.k.a.” (also known as) and a/b/e (doing business).
4. Plurals of abbreviations
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need the periods. The periods are used in the abbreviation for United
Kingdom to avoid the difficulty of pronouncing it as one word.
If the word abbreviated is a proper noun, only the first letter is capitalized
and a period is placed at the end.
i. Initials of people (e.g,. KFK, FDR, RRD) unless they are parts of
the names as spelled out (J.F. Kennedy; F.D. Roosevelt; R.R.
Duterte);
iii. Initial type abbreviations of names of states when used with the
zip codes (e.g,. NY 10010, SC 3311);
vii. Contracted words (e.g,. are not → aren’t; was not → wasn’t;
should not → shouldn’t; does not → doesn’t; will not → won’t
(this is a tricky one!); and
b. Capitalization
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Capitalization is an important tool of mechanics in writing. The most important
use of capitalization is to indicate the beginning of a sentence. Capitalization is
also used in the following manner:
Only the initial letter of a word is capitalized. If you want all the letters to be
capitalized, we say the word should be in “full capitals’ or “full caps.” When
printers want to capitalize a word, they direct that the word be upper cased;
otherwise, they direct that it be lower cased.
1. Words to be capitalized
i. In general
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g. The first word of vertical lists and enumeration;
h. The first word of each of a series of sentences, when the sentence
is introduced by a colon;
Example:
p. Names for the Bible and other religious writings (e.g., Book of
Psalms, The Koran/Quran);
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q. Tittles and offices are capitalized, when they immediately
precede a personal name and are use as part of the name (e.g.,
President Reyes, General Eleazar, Pope Francis, Sir Richard Jones);
When they are used in place of names in direct address (e.g., Please,
Judge, postpone the hearing).
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bb. Common names of animals and plants when they contain
proper nouns as a separate elements (e.g., Bengal tiger;
Baguio beans) or when they refer to specific breeds (e.g.,
German Shepherd; Great Dane; Shih Tzu; Bully or Bulldog,
etc.);
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mm. The names of individual ships, airplanes, and space
vehicles (e.g., S.S. Normandie; Enola Gay; M.V. Karagatan;
M.V. Princes of the Stars; Miss Moneypenny; Ladybird;
Pretty Woman; Queen of the Skies; Apollo 11; Sputnik V;
rr. The names of subjects studied when they are specific titles
(e.g., Human Rights Education; Criminal Law; Criminal
Procedure);
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yy. Ordinal numbers when used with the names of persons,
events, or a period of time and if they precede the name (e.g.,
The Second Congress; the First Infantry Division, Philippine
Army);
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jjj. Trademarks, service marks, collective marks (e.g.,
National Book Store McDonald’s; Coca-Cola; Levi’s; Adidas;
“Fly the Friendly Skies” [United Airlines]; “Hari ng Padala”
[LBC]; “BDO we find ways”);
lll. The term “air force,” “army,” “navy,” and “marines,” when
the form part of an official name;
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c. The first word in numbered phrases within a sentence (e.g., The
agenda will be: (1) call to order, (2) approval of the minutes of the
previous meetings, (3) management report, etc);
m. The names of time zones when written out (e.g., central standard
time; pacific time); and
n. Names of the seasons if they simply declare the time of the year
and are not personified (e.g., summer; spring; winter; autumn).
c. Italics
Italics direct the reader’s attention to certain words in the same manner that a
writer underlines parts of his handwritten work to underscore certain words.
Italic type is used in keyboarded or typeset material. In typed or handwritten
materials, underlining is used. Italic type is so named because it was invented by
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the Italians. Italics are the slanted types as distinguished from the Roman or the
upright type.
h. Words and letters referred to as such. The words and letters may
be enclosed in quotation marks instead of using italics);
j. Names of cases (e.g., Chi Ming Choi vs. Court of Appeals and
Gina Lao);
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l. Individual letters used in enumeration or a list within sentences.
(e.g., The agenda for the meeting are the following: (a) Call to
Order, (b) Determination of Quorum, (c) Approval of Minutes of
the Previous Meetings, etc.);
d. List
More than three things put together grammatically constitute a “list.” Use a list
whenever you have three or more items that are logically parallel.
The list set on separate lines would be harder to follow if there is a shift in the
word structure, like using gerund phrases in some lines and nouns in other lines,
or using sentences in some lines and clauses in other lines.
Example:
The list is set of the text if: (i) the items in the list consist of more than ten words;
(ii) the items are phrases but not complete sentences; and (iii) there are more
than three items in the list.
Introduce each item in the list with the same word if the items on the list consist
of more than three words of if the repeated word is to be emphasized.
a. If the list is included in the text, introduce said list with a colon
and insert parenthetical numbers or letters.
Example:
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roofing materials specified by the owner; (4) to finish the
work within 30 days from December 1, 2021; (5) to be paid
P200, 000 for the work; and (6) to provide a two-year
guarantee for the work.
Example:
e. Use a comma even if the list is set off from the text. A list can be
distinguished from the rest of the paragraph by putting each item
therein on a separate line and starting each line with a number,
letter or other market.
Example:
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Use a semicolon to separate items in a list when there is a comma
separating one of the items on the list.
e. Spacing
Spacing between letters and words (horizontal spacing) and between lines
(vertical spacing) is a matter of the mechanics of composition. In typewritten
materials, the spacing between letters is provided for by the typewriting
machines. The spacing between words and lines is the concern of the typist and
the writer, while in printing, it is the concern of the typesetter.
1. Uses of Spacing
Note: A line with narrow spacing is called a “close line,” one with
wide spacing, an “open line.” Excessively wide spacing detracts
from readability and should be avoided.
f. Syllabication
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dipthong sound. Some patterns of syllabication do not follow the segmentation
suggested by the sound of words.
If you have to divide a words at the end of a line, put the hyphen at the end of the
first line, never at the beginning of the second line. The part that remains at the
end of the line should suggest the part beginning the next line. Do not end with
the hyphen more than two consecutive lines.
If you cannot divide a word at the end of a line, leave blank space and carry the
word over to the next line.
a. Division of Words
2. Divide into separate syllables two vowels that follow each but are
pronounced separately.
4. Divide before the consonant and carry it over with “ing” when the
syllable ends in on “le” and the only audible vowel is the liquid “l.”
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5. Divide after the consonant an accented syllable containing a
single middle consonant, which is preceded by a short vowel.
In the latter case, the effect would be to divide a simple, base form.
12. Divide words with suffixes before the suffix, thus separating
them from the stems of the word.
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Example: Hoping Syllabication: Hop-ing
Dearest Dear-est
4. Do not divide a word if only one or two letters are left standing by
themselves either at the end of one line or the beginning of the next
line.
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7. Do not divide a word ending with “ed” to form the past tense and
which is not pronounce as a syllable.
11. Do not divide personal names. If you have to divide, make the
break after a middle initial.
12. Do not divide initials used in place of given names. If you have
to divide, make the break after the second or last initials.
Example: YMCA
APO
UNESCO
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17. Do not divide large numbers expressed in figures. If you have to
dived, make the break after a comma, but not after a decimal point
or a single digit.
18. Do not divide words ending with “eous,” “iol,” and “ious.”
19. Do not carry over to the next line two letter syllables.
Do not divide:
2. A word of only one letter would be left either at the end of one
line or the beginning of another;
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