Fce Formal Letter
Fce Formal Letter
Fce Formal Letter
HINTS
How to write formal letters
[1] Salutation or Greeting
• (A) If you know the name of the person you are writing to use the title
(Mr, Mrs, Miss or Ms) and the surname only. If you are writing to a
woman and do not know if she uses Mrs or Miss, you can use Ms,
which is for married and single women.
• Examples: "Dear Mr Simpson," / "Dear Mrs Flanders," / "Dear Miss
Skinner," / "Dear Ms Van Houten,"
• (B) If you do not know the name of the recipient of the letter begin with
"Dear Sir," / "Dear Madam," (if you know you are writing to a man or a
woman) or "Dear Sir or Madam," (if you do not know the sex of the
person you are writing to).
[2] Body
[2.1] Opening
The first paragraph states the reason(s) for writing and, if needed, what you
are responding to (an advert, a prospectus...). In addition, an opening
paragraph is needed to make reference to previous correspondence.
Useful phrases for the opening
• I would like to apply for one of the scholarships I saw advertised in your
prospectus. (applying for a scholarship)
• I am looking for an outdoor work during the summer holidays and I
would like to apply for the position of hotel lifguard assistant which I say
advertised in my university's student newspaper. (applying for a job)
• I have seen your advertisement for the post / vacancy / job of…
advertised in the local newspaper on 16 June. I am writing because I
would like to apply for the job. (applying for a job)
• I am the secretary of my college Science Club. I saw your
advertisement for the exhibition "The Next 100 Years" and I am
interested in organising a group visit. I was wondering if I could ask you
some questions about it. (requesting information)
• I am writing (in order) to complain about the advertisement for your new
game. Having just played the game, I realise that the advertisement is
misleading. (complaint letter)
• I am writing with regard to ... I am writing with reference to... I am writing
in response to...
• Thank you for /your letter of 9 May... /for your letter regarding...
• In reply tor your letter of 8 May, …
[2.2], [2. .] Main content
The rest of the body will be organised in paragraphs: that will make reading
easier and the effect on the target reader will be better. For example, an
application letter may have this layout and paragraphing:
• Salutation or greeting
• #1 Opening (first paragraph)
• #2 About you (age, where you live, education-training and/or work
experience relevant to the job, languages ...)
• #3 Reasons for applying (why you are suitable for the job)
• #4 Conclusion (availability for interview, further questions, ... - if
necessary)
• Closing
• Final salutation
• Name and surname
For any type of formal letter, paragraphing is just a matter of common
sense, grouping ideas logically (covering two points or questions in one
paragraph, two other points or questions in another paragraph...). You should
aim for three to five paragraphs
The end of your letter is as important as the beginning. You usually state what
you would like the recipient to do, make a reference to a future event, offer to
help...
• I look forward to hearing from you soon / I look forward to receiving your
reply
• I look forward to receiving a full refund (in a complaint letter)
• I would like to know what you are going to do about this situation (in a
complaint letter)
• I would like to thank you in advance for this information (in a enquiry
letter -requesting information)
• If you require/Should you need further information, please do not
hesitate to contact me/feel free to contact me.