CHAPTER 1 INTRODUCTION A. Background of the Study Health is the foundation of life.

It is the ability of
an individual to perform well physically, mentally, emotionally, and socially with the absence of diseases. A
healthy person means being free from all infirmity and sickness. Health care comes through
understanding health itself. It is the proper maintenance of a well-being that can be upgraded through
medical services. Medical services are processes that address injuries and manage illnesses providing
assistance to patients. It is consist of workers who provide support to people in need of treatment and
consultation of their state. These workers are distinct from other health care providers as they have a wide
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Health is the foundation of life. It is the ability of an individual to perform well physically, mentally,
emotionally, and socially with the absence of diseases. A healthy person means being free from all
infirmity and sickness. Healthcare comes through understanding health itself. It is the proper maintenance
of a well-being that can be upgraded through medical services. Medical services are processes that
address injuries and manage illnesses by providing assistance to patients. It consists of workers who
provide support to people in need of treatment and consultation of their state. These workers are distinct
from other health care providers as they have a wide scope of practice and approach to medical care –
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 ... of a well-being that can be upgraded through medical services.

 Furthermore, a school nurse must be licensed and registered.
 ... they need, and when what they need is consistently located where they expect it to be, their ...
 ... a school and a system must be established to tackle on issues regarding ...
 Also, it is conveyed that poor quality healthcare ...
 ... performance of the students will be affected as well as the quality of education ...
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Vocabulary Word Count: 85

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interrelationships, standardization, comprised, absence, infirmity, processes, distinct, scope, additionally,
personnel, cardiopulmonary, assists, apparatus, compromised, substandard, established, programmes,
capacities, alliances, globally

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