Edtp 600 - C Randall - Building Our World Unit and Lesson Series
Edtp 600 - C Randall - Building Our World Unit and Lesson Series
Edtp 600 - C Randall - Building Our World Unit and Lesson Series
Unit Overview
Course: English
Grade Level: 7
Unit Rationale/Context: This mini unit is the second in the year, coming after a unit on
Perspectives, in which students have read fables, fairytales, myths, and legends, and explored
how perspective in those stories influences theme. The common task for the prior unit asked
students to write a perspective-shifted fable or fairytale to highlight a different theme, one in
keeping with that character’s traits and unique perspective. In this unit, students will build on
their understanding of character and theme in explorations of the novel The Girl Who
Circumnavigated Fairyland in a Ship of Her Own Making (henceforth known as Fairyland) by
Cathrynne M. Valente. The focus of the current unit is for students to expand their
understanding of figurative language techniques such as imagery and allusion. Students will
understand how figurative language creates mood and tone, and how those contribute to setting
and worldbuilding. Throughout the larger unit, students will listen to selections from S. J.
Tucker’s album Wonders, which depicts scenes and characters from Fairyland. At the end of this
mini-unit, students will complete a common task comparison essay on mood in the novel versus
mood in a song from Wonders. Later mini units will enrich students’ understanding of Fairyland
through application of the hero’s journey.
Relevance to Students: Students will regularly be asked to relate their own experience to
September’s experience in Fairyland. Through comparative exercises using Fairyland and
Wonders, students will see how artists build on the works of others by creating works inspired by
another, and see how this occurs in music, film, and literature of interest to them. Since I follow
S. J. Tucker on social media and have spoken with her a few times, I might also be able to bring
her in to school for a presentation and performance, mostly to capture student’s imagination
and provide a new perspective regarding how artists build on each other’s work.
Standards Addressed:
• RL.7.1 Cite several pieces of textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says
explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.
• RL.7.4 Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including
figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of rhymes and other repetitions
of sounds (e.g., alliteration) on a specific verse or stanza of a poem or section of a story
or drama.
• RL.7.7 Compare and contrast a written story, drama, or poem to its audio, filmed, staged,
or multimedia version, analyzing the effects of techniques unique to each medium (e.g.,
lighting, sound, color, or camera focus and angles in a film)
• W.7.6 Use technology, including the Internet, to produce and publish writing and link to
and cite sources as well as to interact and collaborate with others, including linking to
and citing sources.
• W.7.9 Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection,
and research.
• SL.7.1 Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups,
and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 7 topics, texts, and issues, building on
others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.
• SL.7.2 Analyze the main ideas and supporting details presented in diverse media and
formats (e.g., visually, quantitatively, orally) and explain how the ideas clarify a topic,
text, or issue under study.
ISTE Standards
• 1C Students use technology to seek feedback that informs and improves their practice
and to demonstrate their learning in a variety of ways.
• 7A Students use digital tools to connect with learners from a variety of backgrounds and
cultures, engaging with them in ways that broaden mutual understanding and learning.
• 7B Students use collaborative technologies to work with others, including peers, experts
or community members, to examine issues and problems from multiple viewpoints.
• Students will identify and explain how figurative language techniques such as imagery
and allusion develop mood in Fairyland.
• Students will examine how authors build their imagined worlds through descriptions of
setting.
• Students will compare and contrast the treatment of the same story (September’s
journey) across media by discussing Fairyland and musical selections from Wonders.
• Students will practice annotation skills, identifying figurative language techniques and the
effect of diction in musical selections from Wonders and close reading excerpts from
Fairyland.
• Students will reflect upon their own experiences and connect to September’s journey
through frequent journal writing exercises.
Summative Assessment: The summative assessment will be an essay comparing how S. J. Tucker
and Cathrynne M. Valente establish mood in their song and book. Since the song is based on the
book, students will compare how the same work is adapted in another medium and how that
changes the mood and perspective.
Lesson 1
Grade Level: 7
Context for Learning: As the first lesson in the unit, students will need no prior knowledge of
imagery aside from their own background on the five senses. They will draw upon their
experience in finding text evidence to back up their claims throughout discussion, which was
practiced in unit 1. The lesson also builds upon annotation practice from unit 1, in which
students learned how to create keys to look for words with positive and negative connotations.
Standards Addressed:
• MCCSS - RL.7.1 Cite several pieces of textual evidence to support analysis of what the
text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.
• MCCSS - W.7.9 Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis,
reflection, and research.
• MCCSS - SL.7.1 Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in
groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 7 topics, texts, and issues,
building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.
• MCCSS - SL.7.2 Analyze the main ideas and supporting details presented in diverse media
and formats (e.g., visually, quantitatively, orally) and explain how the ideas clarify a topic,
text, or issue under study.
• ISTE - 7A Students use digital tools to connect with learners from a variety of
backgrounds and cultures, engaging with them in ways that broaden mutual
understanding and learning.
Materials:
• Smartboard (or pdf projected on screenshare using Zoom or similar software)
• Imagery PowerPoint
• Class set of laptops (optional)
• Imagery cloze notes (hard copy or Google docs)
• Imagery graphic organizer (hard copy or Google Docs)
• 5 highlights exit ticket (hard copy)
• Lots of highlighters (yellow, pink, blue, green, and orange or purple)
Proactive Behavior Management: Posters of the class’s “Ground Rules for Respectful Discussion”
would be hung on the wall. The day’s objective, agenda, and bell-ringer instructions would be
posted on the board as students are walking in. Students will pick up their English journal, which
are stacked on a table by the door as they walk in. Students would already be seated in tables of
four, matching the group configurations of the day. Highlighters will be at the tables prior to
entrance. Group work instructions will be clearly posted on the smartboard when the time
comes. A section of the board reserved for “student stars” will allow me to write down and call
out any students who are well-prepared and following directions, which will signal other
students to transition efficiently. Students begin and end the day with an independent activity,
as usual, which allows me to complete homework checks and give out monthly raffle tickets to
students who have earned them throughout the lesson.
Provisions for Student Learning: Students will be encouraged to be actively engaged through
activation of their intrinsic motivation. As mentioned above, student stars who are on task and
well prepared are praised for their focus and recognized on the board. Students will also be
encouraged to actively participate through tiered cloze notes and checks for understanding
across Bloom’s taxonomy. Furthermore, groups that identify more than the minimum of imagery
examples will receive raffle tickets for a monthly drawing of prizes, which is usually a strong
motivator to go above and beyond.
Procedures:
• Introductory/Developmental Activities
o Note: Students will have read chapter 1 of Fairyland for homework and submitted
their reading check question online prior to class.
o Bellringer (journal): Imagine you are heading to a holiday party. You enter the
house. What do you experience when you’re there? What do you see when you
enter? What music is playing and who is talking? What foods are you eating? Give
as rich of a description of your sensory experience as possible. (5 minutes of
writing, 3 to share)
▪ As students write, I will pass out the cloze notes on imagery.
o Bridge: After students share their journals and their sensory experiences, I will ask
students if they happen to know the five senses, and what writing that appeals to
those senses is called. Then, we will launch into the notes.
• Instructional Strategies:
o I do – Imagery PowerPoint and Guided Notetaking (10 minutes): Students will
complete cloze notes, filling in blanks in their packets that correspond to the
bolded/underlined words in the PowerPoint slides. The PowerPoint will review
the 5 types of imagery, examples of each, and pitfalls in identifying imagery vs
non-imagery details in texts. As we go through the notes, students will respond to
checks for understanding in the checkpoints (e.g. “Where is the olfactory imagery
in this example?”).
• Closure: The class will regroup, and I will ask students review the definition of imagery, its
purpose, and which sense each of the 5 types corresponds to. As students leave, they will
drop their exit tickets and raffle tickets (if applicable) in their respective boxes.
Adaptations:
• Laptops and assistive technology: students who have dysgraphia will be able to use
laptops and assistive technology during notetaking and journal writing activities
• Full notes: students who have dyslexia and similar learning needs will receive a complete
copy of the notes, and will have the option of highlighting important terms
• Audiobook: an audiobook version of Fairyland will be available to students who receive
this accommodation on their IEP and 504 plans. This is an accommodation they will
receive prior to the lesson during their reading for homework.
Assessment:
• Checks for understanding: students will volunteer to answer checks for understanding
throughout the PowerPoint notes, to see whether they can find examples of imagery and
distinguish between an image and non-image.
• 5 highlights on the board and critique: Based on class performance on the 5 highlights on
the board activity, I will be able to see whether students are able to avoid pitfalls in
imagery identification and can identify all types of imagery.
• Fairyland graphic organizer: This will be assessed with the usual classwork rubric (see
appendix). I will also walk around during this activity to give groups additional guidance
where it is needed.
• Exit tickets: This activity will provide me with specific data on which students are at each
level. Based on the amount of and accuracy of highlighting, I will sort exit tickets into
struggling, developing, and proficient. I will focus on providing extra support to these
students in the next days.
Extension Activities:
• Overlapping imagery: At multiple points in the PowerPoint and 5 highlights on the board
activity, students will be asked to identify overlapping examples of imagery. For example,
if one is describing “rough grains of sand slipping through one’s fingers,” this could be
both visual and tactile imagery. Students who have a good handle on imagery will be
challenged to see where these overlaps occur.
• Extra examples of imagery in Fairyland: Students who have a good handle of imagery will
also be able to have their names entered into a monthly raffle if they find not just 5 but 8
examples of imagery in Fairyland.
Review/Reinforcement (Homework): Students will submit a favorite song of theirs that has one
example of imagery, due the next day. We will be using these in lesson two. Students will also
begin reading chapter 2 of Fairyland, due by lesson 3.
Sample PowerPoint Slide
o Includes
o Ex. As the rain pounded on his back, the fuzzy dog became soaked to the bone.
Highlights on the Board Passage (Guided Example)
Key: Sight – yellow, Sound – Blue, Touch – Green, Smell – Red, Taste – Pink
The hot, July sun beat relentlessly down, casting an orange glare over the farm buildings, the fields, the
pond. Even the usually cool green willows bordering the pond hung wilting and dry. Our sun-baked
backs ached for relief. We quickly pulled off our sweaty clothes and plunged into the pond, but the
tepid water only stifled us, and we soon climbed back onto the brown, dusty bank. Our parched throats
longed for something cool—a strawberry ice, a tall frosted glass of lemonade.
We pulled on our clothes and headed through the dense, crackling underbrush, the sharp briars pulling
at our damp jeans, until we reached the watermelon patch. As we began to cut open the nearest melon,
we could smell the pungent skin mingling with the dusty odor of dry earth. Suddenly the melon gave
all very tall and very rickety: cathedral towers made of nailed boards, cupolas of rusted metal, obelisks of
tattered leaves and little more, huge domes like the ones September had seen in books about Italy, but with
many of their bricks punched out, broken, turned to dust. Just the sorts of buildings where wind howls hardest,
whistles loudest, screams highest. The tips and tops of everything were frozen – including the folk that flew and
flittered through the town, bundled up tight much like the Green Wind himself, their jodhpurs and jackets black
or rosy or yellow, their cheeks puffed out and round, like the cherubs blowing at the corners of old maps.
And indeed, in the icy-blue clouds above the world, a great number of rooftops began to peek out. They were
all very tall and very rickety: cathedral towers made of nailed boards, cupolas of rusted metal, obelisks of
tattered leaves and little more, huge domes like the ones September had seen in books about Italy, but with
many of their bricks punched out, broken, turned to dust. Just the sorts of buildings where wind howls hardest,
whistles loudest, screams highest. The tips and tops of everything were frozen – including the folk that flew and
flittered through the town, bundled up tight much like the Green Wind himself, their jodhpurs and jackets black
or rosy or yellow, their cheeks puffed out and round, like the cherubs blowing at the corners of old maps.
And indeed, in the icy-blue clouds above the world, a great number of rooftops began to peek out. They were
all very tall and very rickety: cathedral towers made of nailed boards, cupolas of rusted metal, obelisks of
tattered leaves and little more, huge domes like the ones September had seen in books about Italy, but with
many of their bricks punched out, broken, turned to dust. Just the sorts of buildings where wind howls hardest,
whistles loudest, screams highest. The tips and tops of everything were frozen – including the folk that flew and
flittered through the town, bundled up tight much like the Green Wind himself, their jodhpurs and jackets black
or rosy or yellow, their cheeks puffed out and round, like the cherubs blowing at the corners of old maps.
Imagery in Fairyland Graphic Organizer
Ex. … her mother’s factory, puffing white Visual September’s ordinary world has
smoke far below her (4) a lot of manufacturing and
pollution.
Lesson 2
Grade Level: 7
Context for Learning: After learning about imagery, students will learn about mood. Instead of
identifying mood through words, which might be difficult for some, they will learn about mood
using music to get the vocabulary down. Students do not have to have prior knowledge about
mood in a literary sense to understand this lesson, nor do they need formal musical training,
since we will be reviewing more common musical terms that can help in our discussion of mood
and have a mood cheat sheet to help us along.
Standards Addressed:
• MCCSS - SL.7.1 Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in
groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 7 topics, texts, and issues,
building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.
• MCCSS - SL.7.2 Analyze the main ideas and supporting details presented in diverse media
and formats (e.g., visually, quantitatively, orally) and explain how the ideas clarify a topic,
text, or issue under study.
• ISTE - 1C Students use technology to seek feedback that informs and improves their
practice and to demonstrate their learning in a variety of ways.
Materials:
• Mood Terms List handout
• Blank Bingo sheets
• Sticky notes
• Class set of laptops
Proactive Behavior Management: As in lesson 1, I will have the same “Ground Rules” posters,
objective/agenda/instruction posting routine, journal pickup procedure, seating arrangement,
and “student stars” practice. Students will also begin and end the day with an independent
activity as usual. Paired work and bingo instructions will be clearly posted on the smartboard
when the time comes. I pass out sticky notes to each of the tables toward the end of the Bingo
activity.
Provisions for Student Learning: Students will be encouraged to be actively engaged through
activation of their intrinsic motivation. As mentioned above, student stars who are on task and
well prepared are praised for their focus and recognized on the board. Students will also be
actively engaged through the Bingo game. Students that call BINGO and have an entire
row/column diagonal filled will receive raffle tickets for a monthly drawing of prizes, encouraging
participation
Procedures:
• Introductory/Developmental Activities
o Bellringer (journal): As you listen to the music, write what comes into your head.
How does it make you feel? If this were in a movie soundtrack, what you think
would be happening during this song? How would the characters feel? (5 minutes
to write; 3 to share).
▪ “Ashitaka and San” from the Princess Mononoke soundtrack will be played
after the start bell rings.
▪ Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OQ6slfP6B8Q
o Bridge: As students mention different qualities of the music (pitch, tempo,
volume, melody, etc.) that evoke a “feeling”, I will write these on the board to
revisit in my direct instruction. After some discussion of the “feeling” the music
evokes and what in the music evokes this feeling, I would connect this to the
concept of mood. While discussing the bridge, I will pass out the Mood Word List
handout to help students identify good mood words during the next activity
• Instructional Strategies:
o Mood Video (7 minutes): Students will watch a short video on how authors create
mood (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SQq7XZ_Im34). I will pause at the
moments indicated in the video to facilitate whole class discussion about mood.
▪ Students can use the Mood Word List handout to help them settle on
good mood terms.
o Revisiting Musical Terms (5 minutes): I will revisit the list of musical terms the
class came up with and ask students to volunteer definitions of each. I will tweak
these definitions and add a few terms (rhythm, crescendo, etc.) if necessary.
• Closure: Debrief asking students which moods seemed most prevalent (positive or
negative) in music they chose, and what aspects of music seemed to communicate these
moods the most clearly. Oral reminder that students will need to finish chapter 2 and
submit their reading check response for homework.
Adaptations:
• Pre-Filled Bingo Sheets: These help students with dysgraphia and dyslexia if they have
trouble with keeping up with the speed of the classroom. Most students will probably
want to choose their own moods.
• Musical Terms Cheat Sheet: While I’m not focusing on students’ acquisition of new
musical terms, ELLs and students without a strong musical background will find a pre-
made list helpful to guide them throughout the class.
• Partner Work Scaffolding: Having a substantial amount of partner work will help
struggling students achieve a basic understanding of mood in music.
Assessment:
• Bingo: By watching student responses and checking their bingo cards after class, I can see
what students understood mood in music and which are still getting the hang of it. The
sticky notes will also give me a good indication of their individual level of comfort with
this concept.
Extension Activities:
• Where’s the Shift: I can challenge advanced students to identify unusual aspects of the
song that show mood or have them identify where there might be a mood shift.
• Reconciling differences: When there is a disagreement about mood for the songs played
in bingo, I will challenge students to consider whether that disagreement is due to
differences in connotation or perspective, which will also prepare them for activities later
in the unit.
Review/Reinforcement (Homework): Students will finish chapter 2 and submit their response to
the reading check question.
Musical Terms Cheat Sheet
Bridge: section of the song/lyrics that marks a transition from one part to the next
Timbre: the quality of an instrument or voice (rough, clear, warm, raspy, bright, mellow, etc.)
Melody: foreground of the music; usually the main vocal part in pop music
Harmony: when two or more notes are heard at the same time; oftentimes harmonies occur
when backup singers accompany the main vocalist and sing at different pitches from the
melody
Mood Cheat Sheet
Grade Level: 7
Context for Learning: Now that students have learned about imagery and mood, it’s time to put
the two together. Students will use their annotation skills from lesson 2 and apply it to
annotating song lyrics in lesson 3. They will also apply their skills in identifying mood in music to
identifying mood in prose through close reading of Fairyland.
Standards Addressed:
• RL.7.1 Cite several pieces of textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says
explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.
• RL.7.4 Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including
figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of rhymes and other repetitions
of sounds (e.g., alliteration) on a specific verse or stanza of a poem or section of a story
or drama.
• RL.7.7 Compare and contrast a written story, drama, or poem to its audio, filmed, staged,
or multimedia version, analyzing the effects of techniques unique to each medium (e.g.,
lighting, sound, color, or camera focus and angles in a film)
• W.7.6 Use technology, including the Internet, to produce and publish writing and link to
and cite sources as well as to interact and collaborate with others, including linking to
and citing sources.
• W.7.9 Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection,
and research.
• SL.7.1 Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups,
and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 7 topics, texts, and issues, building on
others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.
• SL.7.2 Analyze the main ideas and supporting details presented in diverse media and
formats (e.g., visually, quantitatively, orally) and explain how the ideas clarify a topic,
text, or issue under study.
ISTE Standards
• 1C Students use technology to seek feedback that informs and improves their practice
and to demonstrate their learning in a variety of ways.
• 7A Students use digital tools to connect with learners from a variety of backgrounds and
cultures, engaging with them in ways that broaden mutual understanding and learning.
• 7B Students use collaborative technologies to work with others, including peers, experts
or community members, to examine issues and problems from multiple viewpoints.
Materials:
• Whiteboard and Smartboard
• Poll Everywhere + student laptops
• Google docs
Proactive Behavior Management: As in lessons 1 and 2, I will have the same “Ground Rules”
posters, objective/agenda/instruction posting routine, journal pickup procedure, seating
arrangement, and “student stars” practice. Students will also begin and end the day with an
independent activity as usual. However, since this is a very tech-heavy lesson, I will also use
proximity control to make sure students are actively engaged as they use their laptops and smart
devices. I will also display a timer for these activities—when students know they have limited
time to complete work, they are more likely to focus and get it done.
Provisions for Student Learning: Although students might be a bit distracted with technology, my
inclusion of smartphones and laptops in the day’s activity is meant to get students to use their
devices in productive ways. I will use Poll Everywhere to collect all students’ responses, which
allows all students to participate. This is a great platform to help shy students share their
thoughts—if they’re worried about being “wrong,” they will be able to give their ideas without
their classmates knowing who made which response.
Procedures:
• Introductory/Developmental Activities
o Bellringer (journal): Listen to the music and write down the mood of the song.
Which scene in the book is it depicting and from whose perspective? Does this
match your idea of that scene as it was written in the book? Why or why not? (5
minutes to write; 2 to share).
▪ “September’s Rhyme” by S. J. Tucker will be played after the start bell
rings.
▪ Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1gne1wI0bJU
o Bridge: I will explain that S. J. Tucker has created an entire album based on the
novel we are studying, and that one of our tasks throughout the unit will be to
examine how she uses Valente’s work as an inspiration. Many authors and artists
build and comment on each other’s work, so our focus today will be seeing how S.
J. Tucker plays with the mood of the original scene in Fairyland.
o Transition: 3 minutes to allow students to pick up their laptops
• Instructional Strategies:
o Modeling Annotation (5 minutes): After students log in to their laptops, I will
show them how annotate the song lyrics on Google docs. I will walk through the
first verse myself with a think-aloud.
▪ Special focus will be placed on highlighting the imagery, identifying the
type of imagery, and identifying a clear mood.
Adaptations:
• Assistive Technology (laptops): Students with dysgraphia, dyslexia, and other disabilities
will have easy access to assistive technology (speech to text, etc.).
• Venn Diagram Brain Break: As I will be assembling student responses in the Venn
diagram, I will lighten the cognitive load for students with processing difficulties who find
it difficult to take notes during discussion.
Assessment:
• Poll Everywhere: Through student responses in Poll Everywhere, I can see how the entire
class understands the relationship between imagery and mood in song lyrics. Later, I can
also go back to look at individual responses to see which are still struggling with
understanding mood.
Extension Activities:
• Where’s the Shift: Like in lesson 2, I will check in with advanced students during
independent work and challenge them to identify where there might be a mood shift
within the song.
• Tiered Thesis Statements: Students who have a solid understanding of thesis statements
will be challenged to include a 3-part thesis for homework, in which they identify two
similarities and one difference or two differences and one similarity.
Directions: Read through each stanza separately. Then, in the right-hand column, write notes
about types of imagery (visual/sight, auditory/sound, tactile/touch, gustatory/taste,
olfactory/smell) you notice and what affect that imagery might have on the reader.
End question: How does Tucker use imagery to develop the setting of Fairyland? Identify at
least two examples of imagery. Explain what each reveal about Fairyland.
Unit 2 Common Task
Comparing Mood in Fairyland and “September’s Rhyme”
Directions: You will write a multi-paragraph essay in which you compare and contrast how authors use
imagery to develop mood in Fairyland and “September’s Rhyme.” Your essay must include the following:
• A well-written thesis that explains how imagery develops mood in both pieces
• At least two body paragraphs
o One body paragraph must focus on a similarity in their use of imagery and mood
o One body paragraph must focus on a difference in their use of imagery and mood
o Green group MUST have at least three (3) body paragraphs
• At least 4 pieces of properly cited evidence, with 2 quotes from the novel and 2 quotes from the song
• Thorough analysis in which you explain how your quotes prove your point
• A conclusion paragraph that summarizes all your main points