Animal Testing Essay
Animal Testing Essay
Animal Testing Essay
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Outline
Introduction
1. Does it have a title? Is it “catchy”? Is it connected with the topic? Write
it here. Yes, it is catchy and connected with the topic. Genetically Modified
Organism: Transgenics Crops.
2. Is the thesis statement clearly identified? Underline it.
Yes, it is.
3. Does the thesis statement contain the author’s posture on the subject?
Yes, it does.
4. Is there an introduction? Does it give a clear idea of what the writer will
write about?
Yes, there is an introduction.
Yes, the introduction gives a clear idea of the posture of the writer.
5. Does the first sentence of the introduction catch the reader’s attention?
Yes, it does.
6. Are there parts of the introduction that are unclear? If so, underline
them, and put a question mark next to the passage that you did not
understand.
No, everything in the introduction is clear.
Body
7. Is the body of the essay organized with ideas separated into paragraphs
with a smooth transition sentence at the end of each one?
Yes, the body of the essay is organized with ideas separated into paragraphs
with a smooth transition sentence at the end of each one.
8. Does each body paragraph have a topic sentence?
Yes, it does.
9. Are transition words used accordingly and throughout the whole essay?
Yes.
10. Does the essay contain persuasive language and strong vocabulary?
Yes, by reading it, people can be convinced that what is written is correct.
11. Are there any words (verbs, adjectives, nouns, etc.) that could be
substituted for other words because they are too repetitive, not strong
enough to persuade, or simply incorrectly used?
I would substitute the word transgenic, as it is repeated several times.
12. Does the essay contain facts (citations) that support the claims made?
Are bibliographical references accordingly included at the end, and in
APA style?
Yes, it does.
Conclusion
13. Are the main points addressed in the essay restated in the conclusion,
and in a way that gives the sense of completion of the text?
Yes.
14. Are bibliographical references placed at the end under the title
REFERENCES (NOT Bibliography) and in APA style?
Yes.
15. What did you like the most about this essay? What would you do to
improve it?
What I really like about this essay is how easily the ideas are explained for a
better understanding of them.
Animal testing
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Regan, T. (s. f.). Save the animals: Stop animal testing. Lone Star College. Retrieve
from: https://www.lonestar.edu/stopanimaltesting.htm