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Instructor:

Teacher:Eduardo Roca
ESSAY PLANNING SHEET
Name: Joel Fernando Muriel Zrate
Date: 25/01/2015 Term:
Do you think parents should control what their children watch on tv or internet?
Paragraph One: Introduction
Background/Hook-grabber: With technology innovations we have got many
entertainment options like
television, computer games etc. And in todays modern lifestyles unfortunately children
pass their valuable time on watching television and watching videos on the web.
Focusing: From The cable Tv, to the hundreds of channels and thousands of on-demand
video offerings on internet, children have never had more options for how to spend their
time. For parents, however, the amount of content that is out there can often lead to
anxiety about what their children watch on TV, what Web sites they are visiting and who
they are talking to from behind all those electronic screens.
Thesis Statement (State your opinion: three reasons may be inserted): Therefore, in my
opinion, parents should by all means limit their childrens TV and computer screen time,
especially while they are younger.

Paragraph Two: Body 1


Topic Sentence (Reason 1) First of all, there are many programs and contents in the
television that are not appropriate for the education of the children.
Support one: There are violent movies and Tv programs that can affect the behave of
children.
Example: Children who watch a lot of violence become less sensitive to it in the real
world.If children find violence normal, they may accept more violence in society or even
commit violent acts themselves.
Support two: Many shows on television, whether on broadcast or cable networks, are for
adult eyes only.
Example: For instance, violent, sexual, erotic or pornographic films or obscene
publications.
Support three:Moreover, there are also cartoons with adult content, sexual humor or
violence that many children watch without knowing what they are watching.
Example: To illustrate,The simpsons, Family guy,American Dad,Drawn Together, South
park,Ugly americans,etc.
Closing/Transition Sentence: As you can see, there are many programs and cartoons on tv
that are not appropriate for children.

Paragraph Three: Body 2


Topic Sentence (Reason 2) Secondly,Children can watch any type of things on the
internet.

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ESSAY PLANNING SHEET


Name: Joel Fernando Muriel Zrate
Date: 25/01/2015 Term:
Do you think parents should control what their children watch on tv or internet?
Support one: One of the worst dangers of the Internet, for many parents, is the idea that
pornography could pop up and surprise their children. But parents may not realize that
some kids are going online to seek out web porn, too.
Example:There are a lot of web sites of this type of contents that parents should control.
Support two: Anothers web sites that are dangerous for children are bloody real videos.
Example: Such us videos of accidents, murder, rape, torture, ect that a child must not
watch.
Support three: On the other side, there are another types of videos that children must not
watch.
Example: For example, videos of terror, satanic content, homosexual, etc.
Closing/Transition Sentence: In conclusion, while using the internet, children are exposed
to different kinds of materials. In most cases, they are exposed to inappropriate ones
such as sexually explicit materials and/or violent ones .

Paragraph Four: Body 3


Topic Sentence (Reason 3)Lastly, another reason to control what children watch on
internet is the dangers of
the social networks.
Support one: One of the dangers of the social networks are the sexual predatores.
Example: Internet predators are expert manipulators, able to foster a relationship of
dependence with a teenager.
Support two: Social networks like Facebook are very popular online activities. But parents
should be aware of the image their teens are projecting as well as the influences they are
absorbing online.
Example: Many girls upload photos where they appears with little clothing and even
naked.
Support three: In addition, many teenagers and even children are sending or receiving
nude or partially nude photos or videos through the Internet or cell phones. When teens
engage in this risky behavior, many things can go wrong. These images are easy to
forward on to others.
Example: Many teenagers make these types of things through social networks such as
facebook and whatsapp.
Closing/Transition Sentence: Altogether, the Internet is a perfect forum to meet new
people, but some with malicious intent can use it to befriend your child.

Paragraph Five: Conclusion

DAIP

ESSAY PLANNING SHEET


Name: Joel Fernando Muriel Zrate
Date: 25/01/2015 Term:
Do you think parents should control what their children watch on tv or internet?
Restatement of Opinion: Thus, parents should control what their children watch on tv and
internet. Since
Internet and Tv have many dangers.
(Possible: Sum up major points) There are violence and sexual content on tv and
pornography on internet.
Clincher: Recommendations and/or Predictions I recommend to manage the programs
and movies that
their children watch and let them browse on the web just when it is necessary.

DAIP

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