Business Writing for Results: How to Create a Sense of Urgency and Increase Response to All of Your Business Communications
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Effective writing is accessible, professional, and direct. In the business world, the best writing must be friendly but not too conversational, professional without being dry, and results driven without feeling like a “hard sell.” Business Writing for Results shows you how to write emails, reports, proposals, and other action-oriented communications that meet these standards—in three easy steps. You’ll write cleaner, more polished communications in far less time than you ever thought possible.
Using engaging and thought-provoking examples and interactive exercises, the lessons in this book will help you express your ideas clearly, concisely, and persuasively. You’ll discover how to write:
- Proposals that generate new business
- Reports that illuminate key points
- Emails that are easy to read and respond to
- Training workbooks that facilitate deep understanding and results-based learning
- Letters that get you job interviews, business opportunities, and donations
Using a reader-focused approach, you’ll learn professional tips and tricks that are easy to remember—and that work. Business Writing for Results helps you get your points across clearly, quickly, and effectively in order to produce the outcomes you want.
PRAISE:
“A life ring in disguise. I feel like I’m drowning at work and through this book, the rescue boat is in sight and coming my way. Thank you, Jane.” —Karen A. Polan, Senior Field Specialist, First Energy
“Jane’s real life examples helped me understand the concepts.” —Christine Lotz, Product Research Technician, Hillshire Farms
“After implementing several of [her] suggestions, we boosted the bottom line by 15-20 percent. Thanks, Jane.” —Denise Dennis, Office Manager, Eye Surgery Associates
“Business Writing for Results is terrific! I’ve been in business for twenty years, so it takes something special to get through the haze of habit! Jane’s book does it!” —Nancy Hartman, Writer, TKR Cable
“Our highest rated trainer—by far—is Jane Cleland!” —Candace Cross, Manager, Training, IBM Corporation
Jane K. Cleland
JANE K. CLELAND once owned a New Hampshire-based antiques and rare books business. She is the author of nearly twenty novels and short stories in the beloved Josie Prescott Antiques mystery series, is the winner of two David Awards for Best Novel, and has been a finalist for the Agatha, Macavity, and Anthony Awards. Jane is the former president of the New York chapter of the Mystery Writers of America and chairs the Wolfe Pack’s Black Orchid Novella Award in partnership with Alfred Hitchcock Mystery Magazine. She won the Agatha Award for both of her books on the craft of writing, Mastering Suspense, Structure and Plot and Mastering Plot Twists. She is part of the fulltime English faculty at Lehman College, a contributing editor for Writer’s Digest magazine, and lives in New York City.
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- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5This is very accessible book for business writing. It has practical advice a writer can use immediately. I've used the concepts in this book for writing proposals, memos, and other business communications. It was a required text in a graduate-level communications course I took.
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Business Writing for Results - Jane K. Cleland
Introduction
Malcolm Forbes once said, A good business letter can get you a job interview, get you off the hook, or get you money. It’s totally asinine to blow your chances of getting whatever you want with a business letter that turns people off instead of turning them on.
Here’s the bottom line: If you can’t produce well-written communications, it’s unlikely you’ll achieve business success. No matter what your industry, no matter what your job, no matter what other business abilities are required to succeed in your career, you must be able to get your points across clearly and persuasively in writing. Writing well in business involves more than merely following the rules of grammar. It requires a keen understanding of two things:
1. Your objective—what do you want your readers to do as a result of reading your material?
2. Your target audience—what is going to motivate your readers to do whatever it is you want them to do?
Most business professionals understand that the ability to communicate clearly and concisely is not an optional business skill—it’s a critical one. What they usually haven’t considered is that business writing is a different kind of writing from the writing they learned in school. It’s neither academic nor informal. It differs from technical writing, creative writing, and journalism. Just as each of these writing styles has standards unique to it, so too is business writing unique. At its best, it’s conversational without being chatty, accessible without being too familiar, clear without being overly simplistic, and professional without being stuffy. This book sets out an easy-to-use and easy-to-understand three-step system guaranteed to help readers write business communications well.
INFLUENCE DECISION-MAKERS AND GET THE RESPONSE YOU WANT
Through case studies, examples, and hands-on exercises, you will learn to use my three-step model to respond in all media. You’ll read examples that reflect the kind of writing you do every day—from emails and the Web to traditional reports, from sales letters to collection letters, and from proposals to memos.
Specifically, you will learn to write:
• email subject lines that get your messages opened ahead of the pack
• proposals that persuade others to your point of view
• memos and letters that express your ideas succinctly
• Web copy that encourages interactivity
• workbooks and training materials that motivate students to learn
• reports that influence decision-makers
You’ll learn strategies to adapt the valuable guidelines and techniques used by today’s most successful business writers. Through exercises and lively debriefings, you’ll discover how to write persuasively. Whatever the media, you’ll know how to achieve these critical business objectives:
1. Motivate readers to specific action (for example, request a personalized quote
or call for further information
).
2. Create just the image you seek to convey (conservative and professional, for instance, or informal and playful).
3. Write error-free documents in one-third less time. (By following the three-step system, the writing process is streamlined.)
4. Catch even the hardest-to-find mistakes. (Specific proofing tactics go beyond the basics; not only will typos and the like be found, but learning to fix common errors encourages critical evaluation.)
5. Avoid common mistakes that undermine individual and organizational credibility (such as run-on sentences and improper punctuation).
6. Rivet readers’ attention to get emails and letters opened and read (by providing meaningful information in the subject line of an email or in the opening line of a letter, for example).
Everyone who writes for business will benefit from this book. Experienced writers will enjoy a refresher course and pick up dozens of timesaving tips. Novices will learn an approach proven to quickly and efficiently generate written communications. You will learn everything you need to know to get your ideas across clearly and persuasively. Through exercises and practice—and by reading alternative solutions to the exercises—you’ll learn how to use my tried-and-true three-step model to dramatically improve your writing.
A METHODICAL SYSTEM THAT PRODUCES RESULTS
By dividing the task of writing into three distinct steps, you’ll find the process of writing easier and discover shortcuts that will save you time. The three steps are:
Step One: Get Your Thoughts in Order
Step Two: Create a Draft on Paper (or on Your Computer)
Step Three: Revise for Clarity
Within each chapter, there are several exercises. Intended to ensure that you practice using the tools, the exercises are challenging and fun. Additionally, the exercises will help you:
• prove to yourself that you’ll be able to remember and use the three-step model
• know that there are always several ways to express a thought; this tip helps you avoid writer’s block as you hunt for the one right
way to write something
• save time and energy while still producing top-notch writing; no more will you be dependent on the aha
of creative inspiration
Each chapter uses specific techniques to elicit the information needed to write well. This approach, therefore, becomes a checklist for you as you go through the writing process. Over time, you’ll discover that the more frequently you consult the checklist, the more quickly the system will become second nature.
The checklist includes:
Step One: Get Your Thoughts in Order
Answer the question, What do I want my readers to do as a result of reading this?
Analyze your audience by considering their personalities and by using the Formality Index.
Assess your writing assignment with the Matrix of Persuasion.
Step Two: Create a Draft on Paper (or on Your Computer)
Organize your thoughts.
Use the Hub & Spokes model to get your thoughts on paper. Once done, select your beginning and ending paragraphs.
Generate a first draft.
Step Three: Revise for Clarity
Revise to a second draft with the Empathy Index, and focus on the lead and salutation.
Add a snappy close. (And consider adding a P.S., addendum, appendix, enclosures, or attachments.)
Make the writing specific.
Select the best words using the principle of FURY.
Ensure the writing is concise, clear, positive, and parallel.
Check your grammar, punctuation, word usage, and capitalization.
Make the draft visually appealing.
Read the entire draft.
A SYSTEM TESTED AND PROVEN TO WORK
Attendees at my various writing seminars report that my three-step writing system works. In the twelve years I’ve been speaking on this subject, refining my systems and methods, more than ten thousand people have attended my programs; their successes prove my methods work and attest to the fact that you will benefit, too. No matter how good or poor your writing is now, you’ll learn to write better, more clearly, and more persuasively—and you’ll do it in less time.
CHAPTER ONE
Arrange Your Thoughts
A METHODICAL PROCESS
Writing for results requires encouraging your readers to take action. In this chapter, you’ll learn how to arrange your thoughts so that you write with the action in mind. When you think first and then write, you have a much better chance of achieving your objective.
You’re going to learn a methodical process, one that will be easy to use and easy to remember. In this chapter, you’re going to use three tools that, taken together, will help you set your objective and analyze your audience. The three tools are:
1. Answer the question, What do I want my readers to do as a result of reading this?
2. Analyze your audience by considering their personalities and using the Formality Index.
3. Assess your writing assignment with the Matrix of Persuasion.
SET ACTION OBJECTIVES
The first tool in writing for response is knowing exactly what you want your readers to do as a result of reading your material. Determining an action objective makes writing easier and more straightforward. Keeping the end result in your mind as you write enables you to aim for it. When you know where you’re heading, you’re more likely to get there.
Let’s say, for example, that your boss has asked you to organize the summer picnic. You’ve selected the venue and need to announce it. You decide to send an email to everyone in the company. Consider these two objectives:
1. I want to inform employees about the date of the summer picnic.
2. I want employees to RSVP regarding the summer picnic by the fifteenth of the month.
To get people to RSVP, you need to inform them of the date; however, simply informing the employees in no way motivates them to act.
An action objective focuses on the response you hope to elicit; a passive objective focuses on you or your goals. An action objective, for example, states, to confirm via email,
whereas a passive objective states, to understand my points.
Every time you identify a passive objective (such as, to inform
), convert it into an action objective (to RSVP,
for instance). The easiest way to do this is to ask yourself the question, Why do I care?
In this example, posing the question to yourself would elicit an answer that leads directly to the desired action:
I want to inform employees about the date of the summer picnic.
Why do I care if they’re informed? Because…
I want employees to RSVP regarding the summer picnic by the fifteenth of the month.
If you send your boss an email updating him (or her) that you’ve scheduled a meeting for next Tuesday, you may think your objective is to update him on the progress you’ve made.
But to update
is a passive objective. Convert it into an action objective by asking yourself, Why do I care if he is updated?
Your answer may be:
I want my boss to tell me I’m doing a good job.
I want my boss to ask me to let him know how the meeting went.
I want my boss to congratulate me on having succeeded in scheduling the meeting.
All of these statements are action oriented; you want your boss to do something—in this example, to tell, ask, or congratulate. Knowing the action you seek makes the entire writing process easier.
Sometimes you desire an action objective that aims to avoid a negative consequence. In this example, when you ask yourself, Why do I care about updating my boss?
you may respond:
I don’t want my boss to ask me for an update; I want him to perceive that I’m on top of things.
Read each of the scenarios in Exercise 1 and write an action objective that best describes what each person wants his or her reader(s) to do. If you find you’re writing a passive objective, ask yourself, Why do I care?
to help you transform the passive objective into an action objective.
Following each scenario are examples of well-written objectives. Keep in mind that there are many good variations. If the objective you write allows you to envision a reader doing something, it’s a well-written objective. On the other hand, if your objective describes a feeling or thought, or if it expresses an intention, it’s not likely to be effective. As you practice writing objectives and evaluate your work, think action!
EXERCISE 1: Write a One-Sentence Objective
1. Justin’s company has an intranet that posts openings within the company and all its subsidiaries worldwide. Justin wants to apply for a new position within his business unit. The job he’s interested in represents a promotion and would move him up to the same level as his current boss. Company policy requires that job applications include a letter of support from the employee’s current supervisor. Justin has decided to send an email to his boss as a first step in putting together his application for the new job.
Write a one-sentence objective for Justin’s email.
Justin’s action objectives might include:
• To receive an email from my boss that enthusiastically endorses my job application.
• To get a phone call from my boss to schedule a time to meet and discuss my job application.
2. Mariana, vice president of a telecommunications firm, has received a letter of complaint from a customer. The customer reports that he was treated rudely by Norman, a customer satisfaction team member. Mariana wants to gather information before responding to the customer’s letter and decides to make her request in writing. She plans to email Norman directly and copy his boss.
Write a one-sentence objective for Mariana’s email.
Mariana’s action objectives might include:
• To receive from Norman a written explanation of his conduct within twenty-four hours.
• To have the customer’s records forwarded to me by Norman’s direct supervisor by the end of business today.
3. Philip is a volunteer at a crisis hot line center in his community. He has joined a 10-kilometer walk-a-thon for the hot line; every person he signs up agrees to donate one dollar for every kilometer that he completes. He decides to create a small flyer and slide it under the doors of the residents in his apartment building.
Write a one-sentence objective for Philip’s flyer.
Philip’s action objectives might include:
• To receive signed pledges under my door this week.
• To get ‘way to go’ notes of support, in addition to the signed pledges, under my door this week.
4. Tawana owns and operates a small bookkeeping service. Business is good, and she decides to send out sales letters in an attempt to grow her business.
Write a one-sentence objective for Tawana’s letter.
Tawana’s action objectives might include:
• To receive phone calls from potential customers requesting more information.
• To receive phone calls from potential customers signing up for my bookkeeping service.
As you write action objectives, keep alert for passive language. In general, avoid words that are not specifically action oriented, such as:
• educate
• motivate
• inspire
• inform
• update
Instead, use words and phrases that are directive and action oriented, such as:
• Call and reserve your place at…
• Write for further information…
• Attend the meeting…
• Email your staff…
• Complete the form…
Once you have a clear, action-oriented objective, you’re ready to go on to the second step: targeting your specific readers.
ANALYZE YOUR TARGET READERS
In order to create the sense of urgency needed to get your target readers to take the action that you want them to take, you need to understand their needs and wants, and you need to address them with the proper level of formality. Together, these two steps—understanding what’s likely to motivate your readers and identifying the appropriate level of formality—enable you to write to your specific audience; these steps comprise the second tool of this chapter.
Before you write, you need to think about what thoughts, beliefs, emotions, or ideas are meaningful to your target readers. You need to be able to answer the question Why would they do what I’m asking?
Given that what will inspire one person to act may not motivate someone else, it’s important that you look at the situation from your specific readers’ points of view—not your own—and identify what represents a benefit to those readers.
Consider the difference between features and benefits. A feature belongs to the product or service. A benefit belongs to the user of the product or service. People respond to benefits, not features. For example, let’s say you want to write a flyer offering a discount on purchases of your grass seed.
Features: the size, weight, color, and category of the grass seed
General Benefit: how quickly your lawn will grow
Specific Benefits: Your lawn will be:
• lush and green
• easy to care for
• the envy of your neighbors
• great for croquet and badminton
Consider how each specific benefit is likely to speak to a different kind of person. Some people want a beautiful lawn; others would like a beautiful lawn, but only if it’s easy to care for. Still others want a lawn that will impress people, while others are only interested in a lawn for what it provides—a play area. There’s no right or wrong. There’s no one best benefit. People are different from one another. In order for your writing to generate results, you need to know enough about your target readers to be able to figure out which benefits will motivate them to act.
There are various ways to categorize people. For instance, you could evaluate their demographics (such as age or gender). Or you could assess psychographic factors (for instance, their lifestyle or socioeconomic status). In writing, one of the most useful approaches is to consider your target readers’ personality types. Doing so enables you to select words and phrases that are likely to motivate your target audience to action.
While there are many models that describe personality, the following model is easy to use and easy to remember. Consider the differences among the four personality types below. I call them the Accommodator, the Optimist, the Producer, and the Data Collector.
• The Accommodator likes people but prefers small groups. Accommodators are kind, gentle, calm, methodical, and prudent. They are caretakers and tend to work in jobs that allow them to be helpers.
• The Optimist is sunny in spirit, impulsive, dramatic, fun, articulate, emotional, and sensitive. Optimists are party animals. They are creative and tend to work in jobs that allow them to interact with a lot of people and use their creative flair.
• The Producer is impatient, focused, ambitious, goal oriented, competitive, and intolerant of people’s foibles. Producers are terrific problem-solvers. They are doers and tend to work in jobs that allow them to work toward a