User contributions for Metamagician3000

24 October 2024

• 12:5112:51, 24 October 2024 diff hist +25 Marabou stork Bring the lede into line with the body of the article on whether it actually has the largest wingspan of extant land birds. current

16 October 2024

• 02:3002:30, 16 October 2024 diff hist +39 m Carole Pateman →Biography: link current

15 October 2024

• 06:1606:16, 15 October 2024 diff hist −1 m Stefan Lorenz Sorgner →Nietzsche, posthumanism and transhumanism: Another minor consequential edit - undo an unnecessary paragraph break.
• 06:1506:15, 15 October 2024 diff hist 0 m Stefan Lorenz Sorgner →Nietzsche, posthumanism and transhumanism: A minor consequential edit (punctuation)
• 06:1306:13, 15 October 2024 diff hist +131 Stefan Lorenz Sorgner →Nietzsche, posthumanism and transhumanism: A layer of general copyediting for fluency, clarity, etc.

30 September 2024

• 07:1107:11, 30 September 2024 diff hist +16 m Hawaii added a word for clarity

24 September 2024

• 03:2803:28, 24 September 2024 diff hist +14 45th Chess Olympiad →Kyrgyz proposal to restore full membership: copyedit section
• 03:2503:25, 24 September 2024 diff hist +1 m 45th Chess Olympiad →FIDE Congress: just changed one sentence to past tense
• 03:2303:23, 24 September 2024 diff hist +6 45th Chess Olympiad →Preparations: copyedit section
• 03:2003:20, 24 September 2024 diff hist +63 45th Chess Olympiad light copyedit of the article

19 September 2024

• 04:0304:03, 19 September 2024 diff hist −6 m Lennox Lewis vs. Vitali Klitschko →Background: no reason to use anything except the simple past tense here current
• 03:5303:53, 19 September 2024 diff hist 0 m Oleksandr Usyk →Usyk vs. Hunter: "but" makes more sense than "and" in this sentence

3 September 2024

• 03:1303:13, 3 September 2024 diff hist +40 László Polgár →Books by Polgár: reword so that the claim matches the cited source

23 August 2024

• 10:4310:43, 23 August 2024 diff hist −1 m Metamorpho →Third death and return: again, smoothing the prose with simple past tense narration
• 10:4110:41, 23 August 2024 diff hist −4 m Metamorpho →Justice League: simple past narration
• 05:1905:19, 23 August 2024 diff hist +15 m Irene Vallejo →Career: reword a sentence to make it more logical and grammatical current

21 August 2024

• 11:0911:09, 21 August 2024 diff hist −4 m Deadpool & Wolverine →Box office: Change to simple past tense - no need for anything else here.

20 August 2024

• 08:3208:32, 20 August 2024 diff hist −4 m Simone de Beauvoir →Later years: more accurate language (no need for the euphemism here)
• 08:1508:15, 20 August 2024 diff hist +11 m Terminator: The Sarah Connor Chronicles →Conception: Better wording for accurate gramma and "flow".

10 August 2024

• 14:4414:44, 10 August 2024 diff hist +6 m Australia at the Olympics →History: consequential correction
• 14:4314:43, 10 August 2024 diff hist −41 m Australia at the Olympics →History: Some minor copyediting for flow and clarity

8 August 2024

• 04:4004:40, 8 August 2024 diff hist −4 m Australia at the Olympics →History: correction
• 04:3804:38, 8 August 2024 diff hist +23 Australia at the Olympics →History: General coypedit of section

30 July 2024

• 02:5502:55, 30 July 2024 diff hist +40 Giulio Prisco Same with two of the other books cited (plus added a para break). This should all be clearer. current
• 02:5202:52, 30 July 2024 diff hist +47 Giulio Prisco I've added the authors of a couple of the books mentioned, because this was confusing without that information in the main text

27 July 2024

• 16:2216:22, 27 July 2024 diff hist −4 m Russian cosmism →Other Cosmists: change to simple past tense, as appropriate to the context

8 July 2024

• 03:0403:04, 8 July 2024 diff hist 0 m Hispanic and Latino Americans →Terminology: Correct what seems to be a misplaced (and confusing) bracket.

8 June 2024

• 05:0305:03, 8 June 2024 diff hist −1 m Jonathan Majors →Trial and conviction: grammar
• 05:0205:02, 8 June 2024 diff hist −11 m Jonathan Majors →Trial and conviction: simplify expression
• 04:5804:58, 8 June 2024 diff hist −9 m Magazine Dreams →Production: simplify expression

23 April 2024

• 15:1915:19, 23 April 2024 diff hist +5 m Ancient Church of the East →History: update some wording to reflect that an event has actually happened (more of this needs to be done)

13 April 2024

• 13:3313:33, 13 April 2024 diff hist −8 m Tzvetan Todorov →Career: Change some tense to reflect that Todorov is no longer with us

12 April 2024

• 01:5501:55, 12 April 2024 diff hist −406 Seville Statement on Violence →Criticism: BLP violation - violating material removed
• 01:3301:33, 12 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Jake Paul →Transition into traditional boxing: Just a change of tenses since this is now in the past

25 March 2024

• 04:3304:33, 25 March 2024 diff hist −6 m X-Men '97 →Development: Using the simple past tense is more straightforward here
• 04:2804:28, 25 March 2024 diff hist +11 X-Men '97 →Cast and characters: Worth clarifying this as a lot of people seem to think he is emitting laser beams

15 March 2024

• 08:4808:48, 15 March 2024 diff hist +823 Talk:Falsifiability The lede
• 08:3908:39, 15 March 2024 diff hist +13 Falsifiability All I've done in this edit is some reparagraphing that I think makes it less confusing but see my comment on the talk page

9 March 2024

• 11:4711:47, 9 March 2024 diff hist +14 Ian Shapiro →Justice and democratic theory: Copyedit of the section

2 March 2024

• 09:2309:23, 2 March 2024 diff hist +29 Xenophobia and racism related to the COVID-19 pandemic →Australia: Copyedit to make the prose in this section more readable.
• 09:1709:17, 2 March 2024 diff hist −1 m COVID-19 clusters in Australia Some very initial effort toward getting the narrative to flow more smoothly
• 09:1109:11, 2 March 2024 diff hist +56 COVID-19 pandemic in Australia This article needs a lot of lin-by-line editing if it's to be readable - e.g. trying to get all the narration into simple past tense. I've made a start, but a lot more is needed.

26 February 2024

• 06:3906:39, 26 February 2024 diff hist −3 Meritor Savings Bank v. Vinson The case was not about discrimination on the ground of gender identity or "gender" in any other sense. It was squarely about discrimination on the ground of sex - that is the language in both the statute and the opinion of the court. current

18 October 2023

• 14:0514:05, 18 October 2023 diff hist −1 m KSI vs Tommy Fury →Majority decision controversy: grammatical correction

18 September 2023

• 01:5301:53, 18 September 2023 diff hist 0 m Pharmacogenomics fixing a typo
• 01:5001:50, 18 September 2023 diff hist 0 m Personalized medicine Pedantic grammatical correction for flow
• 01:4601:46, 18 September 2023 diff hist −1 m All of Us (initiative) pedantic grammatical correction

4 August 2023

• 07:0007:00, 4 August 2023 diff hist +21 m Karel Jungwiert Update language current

7 June 2023

• 05:4505:45, 7 June 2023 diff hist +1 Greg Norman →Political views: "refuted" --> "rejected" (to refute a criticism is to answer it *successfully*, but it's not up to us to make that judgment).

9 April 2023

• 07:3807:38, 9 April 2023 diff hist −1 m Inter-State Commission →Background in the Constitutional Conventions: fixing a typo