User contributions for Instant Comma

21 June 2023

• 20:5220:52, 21 June 2023 diff hist −323 Jacques Saada No edit summary
• 20:5120:51, 21 June 2023 diff hist +31 Jacques Saada No edit summary
• 20:5120:51, 21 June 2023 diff hist +4 Jacques Saada No edit summary
• 20:5020:50, 21 June 2023 diff hist +5 Jacques Saada No edit summary
• 20:4920:49, 21 June 2023 diff hist +1 Jacques Saada No edit summary
• 13:3113:31, 21 June 2023 diff hist +1 Willie Pep No edit summary
• 00:5100:51, 21 June 2023 diff hist 0 Casey DeSantis →First Lady of Florida: Per MOS.
• 00:4900:49, 21 June 2023 diff hist +1 Casey DeSantis No edit summary

19 June 2023

• 15:1215:12, 19 June 2023 diff hist +1 Casey DeSantis →Personal life

18 June 2023

• 20:5720:57, 18 June 2023 diff hist 0 Marjory LeBreton →Senator
• 20:5220:52, 18 June 2023 diff hist −1 Marjory LeBreton →Early and personal life
• 20:5020:50, 18 June 2023 diff hist +9 Marjory LeBreton The leader of the government in the Senate is not always in the Cabinet, but LeBreton was. It was a Cabinet position then, not a position of "cabinet rank." By saying "cabinet rank" we give the impression that she wasn't in Cabinet.

17 June 2023

• 19:3619:36, 17 June 2023 diff hist +1 Tucker Carlson Undid revision 1160603578 by Llll5032 (talk) [https://prowritingaid.com/comma-before-which-where-who#:~:text=You%20should%20use%20a%20comma%20before%20“who”%20if%3A,meaning%20of%20the%20main%20sentence] Tag: Undo
• 17:0917:09, 17 June 2023 diff hist −1 Lara Logan →Comments about Darwin and the Rothschild family

15 June 2023

• 00:0000:00, 15 June 2023 diff hist +8 George Conway →Personal life: Makes it sound like they are still together. Plus, there is no source showing that they _still_ live in DC.

14 June 2023

• 22:3922:39, 14 June 2023 diff hist +48 Prime Minister of Canada Two things: (1) breaking down a very long sentence and (2) making it clear when the governor general designates a prime minister (i.e., it's not after every election).
• 22:3422:34, 14 June 2023 diff hist +28 South Glengarry →Communities
• 12:1412:14, 14 June 2023 diff hist 0 Prime Minister of Canada →Privileges: "motioned"?

13 June 2023

• 20:5420:54, 13 June 2023 diff hist −29 Prime Minister of Canada →Role and authority
• 14:4314:43, 13 June 2023 diff hist +26 Prime Minister of Canada →Role and authority
• 14:4214:42, 13 June 2023 diff hist +6 Prime Minister of Canada →Role and authority: This is not a unanimous view. There are academics who dispute this interpretation.
• 14:4014:40, 13 June 2023 diff hist −1 Jacques Saada I give up. Does anyone know how to fix this? Tag: Manual revert
• 14:4014:40, 13 June 2023 diff hist 0 Jacques Saada Nope. I made it worse. Trying again. Tag: Reverted
• 14:3914:39, 13 June 2023 diff hist +1 Jacques Saada Trying to fix this. Hope this works. Tag: Reverted

12 June 2023

• 18:5818:58, 12 June 2023 diff hist −157 Prime Minister of Canada →Term of office: This isn't technically true. And it's unsourced.
• 12:5312:53, 12 June 2023 diff hist +7 Prime Minister of Canada →Privileges

11 June 2023

• 20:3120:31, 11 June 2023 diff hist +17 Prime Minister of Canada →Style of address: What the source says.
• 14:5814:58, 11 June 2023 diff hist +1 Ernesto Miranda →Early life
• 14:1514:15, 11 June 2023 diff hist +1 Prime Minister of Canada →Style of address: This implies that it stopped during the First World War, but lots of sources refer to R.B. Bennett and W.L. Mackenzie King as "premier."
• 14:1314:13, 11 June 2023 diff hist −8 Prime Minister of Canada Campbell was never a professor.

9 June 2023

• 00:3700:37, 9 June 2023 diff hist −1 Prime Minister of Canada →Prime minister-designate of Canada
• 00:3500:35, 9 June 2023 diff hist 0 Prime Minister of Canada →Activities post-tenure: "Returned" makes it sound like he had left.
• 00:3400:34, 9 June 2023 diff hist +19 Prime Minister of Canada →Role and authority: Constitutional conventions are part of the constitution.

8 June 2023

• 22:3122:31, 8 June 2023 diff hist +60 Prime Minister of Canada The first source does indeed say that most Canadians believe they vote directly for the prime minister. Apologies if I got the sources mixed up. As evidence, it points to a source that says that 51 per cent of Canadians (give or take a margin of error) believed this in 2008. That's not evidence that most Canadians believe that now. You asked me to propose alternative text rather than delete. I'm now doing so.
• 22:2822:28, 8 June 2023 diff hist −306 Prime Minister of Canada As I have pointed out before, "commonly held" does not mean "most."
• 14:5514:55, 8 June 2023 diff hist 0 Prime Minister of Canada →Qualifications and selection Tag: Reverted
• 14:5514:55, 8 June 2023 diff hist +9 Prime Minister of Canada No edit summary Tag: Reverted
• 14:5314:53, 8 June 2023 diff hist −2 Prime Minister of Canada →Qualifications and selection Tag: Reverted
• 14:5314:53, 8 June 2023 diff hist +51 Prime Minister of Canada →Qualifications and selection: This is what the source says. That 51 per cent (give or take the margin of error) believed this in 2008, does not mean that most think that now. Tag: Reverted
• 14:5214:52, 8 June 2023 diff hist −306 Prime Minister of Canada →Qualifications and selection: This source does not say that. Tag: Reverted
• 14:5114:51, 8 June 2023 diff hist −446 Prime Minister of Canada This source simply does not say that. Tag: Reverted
• 13:1113:11, 8 June 2023 diff hist −1,075 Prime Minister of Canada Undid revision 1159059332 by Miesianiacal (talk) - Which dictionary? Oxford defines "commonly" as "frequently" or "very often." I very often eat chicken, but that doesn't mean I mostly eat chicken. Tags: Undo Reverted
• 00:0100:01, 8 June 2023 diff hist −1,076 Prime Minister of Canada Undid revision 1158910818 by Miesianiacal (talk) - Does the source say that? I don't see it. He says that the belief that Canadians elect their prime minister is "commonly held (or lazily phrased)," but that's not the same as saying that _most_ Canadians believe it. Tag: Undo

7 June 2023

• 23:5023:50, 7 June 2023 diff hist −2 Ernest Manning Undid revision 1159038327 by Abuu1226 (talk)
• 23:4923:49, 7 June 2023 diff hist −3 Ernest Manning Undid revision 1159038392 by Abuu1226 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 23:4723:47, 7 June 2023 diff hist −15 19 Kids and Counting To be clear that his last name is Duggar.
• 16:4816:48, 7 June 2023 diff hist −15 Matthew Garrett →Life and career

6 June 2023

• 14:4214:42, 6 June 2023 diff hist +2 Netwide Assembler No edit summary
• 13:2113:21, 6 June 2023 diff hist −205 Monarchy of Canada In Canada, it's called "royal consent," not "king's consent". I've added a more up-to-date reference.
• 00:1000:10, 6 June 2023 diff hist −25 Disappearance of Adele Marie Wells Undid revision 1157721177 by Davidgoodheart (talk) Tag: Undo