Talk:Big Red Group

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Hello! I spent the last 15-20 minutes or so of my life restructuring the tone and grammar of basically the entire article to read less like an advertisement. I thought it was terrible when I got here, but looking at past revisions of the article it's clear this problem was much worse before. I've linked to my revision here, and the last revision before any serious rewriting was done here. It's clear this article was written to gain more traction for the company and its products, which is fine now because several editors have worked together to make it read much more factually and less like an advertisement. However, the information on this page is still geared towards being an ad, which is something that cannot be changed by restructuring the tone of an article. So, if anyone with more knowledge (and time) finds this topic, I (and other Wikipedians) would greatly appricate it if you could add more information and better sources to balance out the advert-ness of the article. Thanks! Pandorapaw (talk) 04:56, 13 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]