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Moving in with a Predator ALT: Shy Snackfood By feauxen -- Report

In another alternate take on Moving in with a Predator's sexiest chapter yet, Kit instead of Di ends up taking the first plunge among friends. Will she someday get her chance to shine, or is the poor little thing destined to be an eternal snack? Honestly, I don't think even she could tell you right now, she's a bit distracted.

Yeah, I'm stealing ideas from Vesari again. They've got great stories with a lot of potential alternate endings and a generous policy about who can play around with them, what can I say?

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voredrawing

Posted by voredrawing 2 days ago Report

These alternate endings are great! You should do one on Kit eating one of the girl and even another story idea on Chris or Di eating two of the girls :)

feauxen

Posted by feauxen 2 days ago Report

Well technically Chris eating both of her friends is what the last one was about. That said, I don't really disagree. Pretty much every possible way this chapter could go is sexy as fuck, the only challenge is lining things up so events going differently flows well.

voredrawing

Posted by voredrawing 1 day ago Report

That is true! I more meant to at the same time :) and definitely! Just thought I send a comment through suggesting to make more with Kit as the main pred since you did a good job and making it seem like how Versari woukd write it in my opinion :)

feauxen

Posted by feauxen 1 day ago Report

Glad to hear I imitated the style well, though the fact that I literally just lightly edited half the chapter to have Kit more vorny and didn't even have to fully rewrite the other half I'd be very disappointed in myself if I couldn't manage a style imitation.

As for two at once, while I'd love to, Di literally mentions in this chapter how it takes a very experienced pred like Becky to even fake doing two people at once. Chris, as a first-time pred, is stuck with one at a time unless I'm willing to ignore the rules of the setting. And given how much of the fun is pushing Chris's limits and exploring the beginning of a newfound pred's journey to proper vorophiliac status I don't really think I want to do that.

Now, I wouldn't be against a threesome in Vicky's belly or something like that, though manipulating events to make that seem remotely plausible would take a lot more work than just some editing of a single chapter. Sure, all participants could at the very least be talked into it without TOO much trouble, but as it is Chris and Vicky are still a bit too awkward around each other even in the latest chapter for such a thing to go down, not to mention the fact that Vicky seems to be respecting Chris's "first claim" to her friends.

As for pred Kit...well, nothing's in the works CURRENTLY. Not really. But that could easily change in time.

voredrawing

Posted by voredrawing 1 day ago Report

Wow thank you for the big reply! :) Of course you do what you gotta do and whatever works for you at the end of the day since you are the ond editing them and posting them after all. Maybe with the Vicky idea you could use a later chapter that you feel would work or even this one maybe would work well also with her bursting into the room drunk or something eating all 3 of the girls up, hehe just an idea. I love how Kit been a pred as become a whole thing people want to see happen and would be interesting to see how she reacts.

CrimsonOS

Posted by CrimsonOS 11 hours ago Report

Love these alt's your doing, there are so many instances and alts we want to see, there are two chapters when i read them i am always like what if this happened, keep up the amazing work