Hey everyone, after a really long time lurking. I decided to try and write something and to my surprise I actually enjoyed it.

I typed it all out on deviantART and decided I should probably post it in a more fitting place. This is my first time really writing anything besides a d&d campaign pot line. So I would really appreciate any tips.

A quick synopsis I guess:
The narrator is thinking back to when their girlfriend, decided she would rather be their pet dog than a person. And when woman shows up at their doorstep asking to be their pet cat. Something takes a hold of her.
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WARNING contains vore, digestion, disposal, and pet play


It's been 2 years. 2 years since my girlfriend Sarah became my pet dog Luna. We've known each other for a long time, we grew up together and started dating in high school. She's always been incredibly kinky, we've done a lot of weird stuff together but pet play was her favorite.

A while back now my childhood dog passed from old age, I was depressed for a long time. That was until Sarah had an idea. Instead of getting a new dog, she could be my dog. I told her I wasn't in the mood, but then it happened.

She gave me those big old puppy dog eyes and whimpered, melted right through my heart. I relented and said okay, she excitedly licked my face and started to prance on all fours. After an amazing day of her being my dog, we agreed we didn't wanted to stop so soon.

So we agreed to both take a week off work. During which Sarah would act like my pet dog Non-Stop. It was an amazing time in more ways than one. But all good things come to an end, I thought. But Sarah had other ideas.

The next morning. She continued to act like a dog refusing to stand up or even speak besides barking. I was adamant that the week was over and we had to go back to normal but she refused. Then she did the look again those puppy dog eyes, to my credit I think I lasted longer than usual.

It took a while, (and a lot of money) but I found out people have contracts for this sort of thing. Where they sign away their human rights to be pets for others. The last human thing Sarah did was sign that contract.

From that point on she was my pet dog Luna. Shortly after I got a realistic looking dog costume, with padded paws to help her walk on all fours. I don't think I could see her happier then when she put it on for the first time.

That was until about a year ago. We are on one of our daily walks. Collar around her neck and leash in my hand. By this point we were sort of famous, or I guess infamous is a better term. Most people had a expression like "oh these freaks again" but some people actually looked forward to seeing Luna. They would drop what they were doing, and come pet Luna. Rubbing her fur covered belly telling her what a good girl she was. Coming back home however there was someone waiting for us.

She was a thin woman in her mid-twenties, she was wearing a light brown sweater with matching skirt. Dangling from the skirt was a large ginger tabby colored fur tail, that matched the large ears on top of her red hair. She was hugging her tail nervously, until she saw us. When Luna saw her approaching, she started a low growl.

Which she hadn't done with anyone till now and caught me off guard. Shocked, The cat eared woman carefully got closer, while I pulled back on the leash. It took a while to calm Luna down but in that time the woman introduced herself as Star. She apologized for waiting outside our home, but she felt like she really needed to talk to us.

She explained that she was in a tough situation, because she wanted to be her boyfriend's pet similar to us. But unfortunately this feeling wasn't mutual. Her boyfriend called her a freak, and told her parents. Which she said disowned her after they found out that she just wants to be a cat for the rest of her life.

After this long explanation, I felt sorry and invited her to come in to talk. Luna looked at me confused, her dog ears flopping around at the sudden movement. The three of us walked inside, taking our shoes off. I grabbed something for each of us to drink. Two cans of Coke for star and I, and a bowl of cold water for Luna.

She happily lapped up the water with her tongue, Star watched saying it's amazing the relationship we have. I explained it's something special that we cultivated through years of being together. Sorrowfully Star admitted that being her boyfriend's pet was a secret desire, that she just sprung up on him. And giving into that impulse ruined her life.

I said I was deeply sorry but I still don't know what that had to do with Luna and me. Turns out she was hoping that we would know someone that could help. Whether that was being someone's pet or just a place to stay. Unfortunately we had nobody like that in mind, but we did have room for a guest. Whether they be human or pet.

I sat there contemplating this after all, we just met this woman. Seeing the doubt on my face, Star dropped to her knees and began to beg pleading to let her stay. I was shocked to say the least. to have this woman I barely now ask to be my new pet. But my answer didn't matter because Luna had other ideas.

Luna started growling at this display, clearly not wanting star to stay. I stood up from my chair and told her to calm down. That was a mistake.

Luna pounced on Star knocking her to the ground. I quickly grabbed Luna's collar yelling at her to stop, as star started kicking Luna away. That's when Luna took her chance. Seeing Star about to kick her in the face with both feet, Luna opened her mouth wide. Star's feet went in to Luna's maw and down her throat, with loud wet slop.

Star and I froze, unsure of what just happened. Luna took this opportunity to swallow more of the cat girl. This broke me out of my trance, and I started to yell for her to spit her out. But Star on the other hand was transfixed by the woman dressed like a dog attempting to eat her.

Luna swallowed again, she was up to Star's calves. I was freaking out until, Star calmly told me it was okay. I looked at her confused, asking her what she meant. Star was okay with it. She had nowhere else to go, and clearly Luna did not want to share me with her. I told her we could work something out but she shook her head with a smile. She said that this felt right.

This is the reason she came to us. I looked at her shocked, especially when she said that the inside of Luna's stomach felt good on her feet. I was about yank Luna as hard as I could to free star, but then I saw it. Luna was looking at me, with those big puppy dog eyes.

My heart skipped a beat looking at her face. They both really wanted this. Unsure I slowly took off Luna's dog collar. She greedily continue to eat the woman, with Luna's face going under her skirt meeting her crotch. I told her to slow down, this is a special dog treat that you both need to enjoy. Star visibly shivered at the mention of her being a dog treat. She quickly grabbed her skirt and lifted it off and over Luna's head. Looking back I shouldn't have been surprised, but she wasn't wearing any underwear and her tail was a butt plug.

Luna had a hard time getting around Star's ass. But they were both determined to get her inside that stomach. Star pushed herself off the ground, to help feed herself. At this point I figured, this might actually get Luna to break! I was expecting her to take off her paws, and shove those cheeks down her throat.

But with effort from both of them. Star's ass slid into her mouth with a loud gulp. Star's face was overcome with joy. But that changed quickly as she started to moan. Luna was getting a deep taste of Stars nether regions.

The prodding caused Star to convulse, writhing in pleasure. At that point I noticed the outline of her legs, pushing against Luna's belly and through her costume. I thought to myself this is actually happening. She is swallowing, another full grown woman, whole and alive. And I was incredibly turned on

That's when I got a cheeky thought in my head. I told her it was impolite to play with her food. Star loudly climaxed grabbing her cat tail, At the mention of being called food again. After a second to recover, Luna continued her feast. With a hard swallow she came up to Star's belly button. That seem to wake her up out of her high as she scrambled to get her sweater off.

Luna was getting impatient again. With another swallow she was up to her breasts. At this point Luna's belly was making a definite bulge in her costume. I was transfixed on that belly. I started walking over to rub it when, I heard star ask for help.

I went over to help her with her sweater. When we finally got it off, her headband with the cat ears fell off. She started to freak out and was thinking. Oh no, she's having second thoughts.

But no, she just wanted her ears back. I picked them up and right before I handed them back, i they gave her an ultimatum. I told her this is the point of no return. If I put these back on your head that's it, your dog food. She grabbed the ears from my hand. Then she said something I'll never forget.

"I'm a cat, I was always dog food".

She proudly put ears back on top her messy red hair. And then right on cue. Luna swallowed hard, and worked star's breasts into her mouth. I think after hearing that Luna couldn't agree more, because she ravished the rest of her.

Up to her neck in a second, and then she sat down. Flipping her head up with her ears flopping about. Now with gravity assisting, star slowly slid down into a dark moist cavern. With one more swallow, that was the last time I saw her face.

With only her hands sticking out of my pet, she gave a small wave and I could hear a muffled goodbye. With one last big swallow. The last of her was sent down to to where she belonged. a dog's stomach.

Luna flopped onto her back with a loud thud. Her belly was enormous. It was like she was past 9 months pregnant with twins. I half expected to fur from her costume to split. But somehow those fibers held it together.

She looked at me with her tongue out panting like a dog. I felt my knees next to this large orb. I still couldn't believe that it happened. Thousands of questions we're going through my head. Like how long can she breathe, will her stomach be able to handle her, and would anyone come looking for her. I was freaking out but then, Luna started to whimper pawing at my hand.

She really wanted a belly rub! And I was happy to do it. As I started stroking that gigantic orb of a belly. I could hear a loud moaning coming from inside it. She was alive, and clearly enjoying her time. I rested my head putting my to Luna's stomach. Asked Star if she could hear me, and it was muffled but I heard a yes.

I asked how it felt being dog food. She answered cramped, wet, hot, and perfect! Then she asked if I thought Luna liked the way she tasted. I asked Luna the same question and she replied with a loud wet burp that shook the whole house. I laughed and said I think that's a yes!

For about the next 3 days. Luna's stomach got to work on digesting The young cat girl. It was continuous non-stop pleasure for all three of us.

Star would talk in depth about the whole process. Apparently the feeling of a stomach kneading acid it into her skin felt better than sex. I'm not so sure about that one but I'm not about to judge.

I don't know when exactly she stopped moving. But when Luna's belly started to shrink, I got busy outside. Luckily our backyard leads to a secluded wood. I dug small trench, and through Star's clothes into it. When nature eventually called, Luna released star back into the world in her new form.

Luna squatted over the trench, as the unholy brown mess escaped her butt cheeks. Now I'm not one that's normally into this kind of stuff but I have to admit I was curious.

The first log she dropped was about wide as my head, and seem to go on forever. It stunk like death! I could see bits of bone, and ginger fur.

When it finally stopped, Luna started to whimper she was clearly struggling trying to push something out. As I got close to her, she ripped a loud, wet fart and a fully intact but plug, and femur bone came out her ass. After that the rest came out like smooth brown butter. After she was finally done, she started to kick dirt back to help bury it.

And after a moment of dry heaving I grabbed the femur. I threw it to the side and helped dig. When we were done I cleaned off the femur and gave it back to Luna as an extra treat.

I still don't understand what was going through all of our heads. But I'm sure she's happy where she ended up.

Luna Loved her treat so much, I went online to see if I could start a new diet regimen. Surprisingly, there's a lot of people that don't mind being dog food.

I was laying down in bed with Luna on top of me trying to see if I could find a suitable treat nearby on my phone. And I noticed something when I was petting her head. Her teeth seemed to be sharper and her hair started turning a slight shade of red. I think star left an impression more than just that bone.

That's pretty good, and very easy to read. Not much criticism beyond the fact that I would have liked a short physical description of the characters.

Trajan wrote:That's pretty good, and very easy to read. Not much criticism beyond the fact that I would have liked a short physical description of the characters.

Thank you very much for the feedback. My attention was to keep the narrator vegan and genderless on purpose. So the reader can make up their own image of Luna's owner. But that really did bleed into the rest of the characters on accident.

Also I'm curious, what device are you using to read the post. I did this all on my phone, writing, posting, editing and I was hoping it would be easy to read. But now I'm at my wide screen desktop and it looks really weird to me.

DoggyTreat003 wrote:

Trajan wrote:That's pretty good, and very easy to read. Not much criticism beyond the fact that I would have liked a short physical description of the characters.

Thank you very much for the feedback. My attention was to keep the narrator vegan and genderless on purpose. So the reader can make up their own image of Luna's owner. But that really did bleed into the rest of the characters on accident.

Also I'm curious, what device are you using to read the post. I did this all on my phone, writing, posting, editing and I was hoping it would be easy to read. But now I'm at my wide screen desktop and it looks really weird to me.

No problem, I liked reading it, so I felt like you deserved to get a thumbs up.

Honestly I get wanting to keep the pov undescribed to let the reader immerse themselves. I think that's a fair reason to not add much characterization into the narrator.

I'm reading this on a laptop and it looks fine to me. But by easyness to read I meant more in the way it was written, I wasn't thinking about the formatting.

I really liked this. The whole thing's pretty good, though the last two sentences aren't the kind of thing I personally like in a story like this. I'm on a desktop and the writing looks good, apart from a few minor capitalization errors. Personally, I find the lack of indentation in and spacing between the paragraphs actually makes it easier to read, but that could just be how my brain works. I'd love to see more stories like this.

DeliciousDreams wrote:I really liked this. The whole thing's pretty good, though the last two sentences aren't the kind of thing I personally like in a story like this. I'm on a desktop and the writing looks good, apart from a few minor capitalization errors. Personally, I find the lack of indentation in and spacing between the paragraphs actually makes it easier to read, but that could just be how my brain works. I'd love to see more stories like this.

Thank you for your kind words and feedback. As it so happens I was approved for a the next day after posting this. It happen to have four more stories plus this one there. Apparently my sick little mind can't stop thinking of new things to try.

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